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06-24-05, 10:13 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Pissed off (a comedy OM)
IP: 4CF5 65A7
I got up this morning and flew to school with a knife
Pissed off cause my cousin didn't fuck me last night I stabbed a security guard right dead in the balls Ran to the girl's locker room shocked at wat I saw A GANGBANG,all of them licking each other's clits The whole room smelled like rotten buttermint And I think this morning I OD'd on tynedol pills  I felt dizzy,but still pissed,so I kept on moving Saw a gum on the floor,picked it up,&started chewing I went to the staircase and saw a kid with a ponytail I took him by his head and banged it on the stairail I went right up the stairs and saw the red headed whore I picked her up and threw her vigorously on the floor, And started fuckin until she began to begg for more I got off her,took my knife,and stabbed her chest Right dead square in the middle of her breasts Looked up and saw my Math teacher butt naked He said ,"The police know where your located" Suddenly police barged in and had me surroun-did One of em came up to me and said'U goin to da chair kid" |
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06-24-05, 11:31 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 775C 64E4
lol
you could make this shit dope if you wanted too... you need more with, some internals and shit... it wasnt bad at all... dont get me wrong... but re write it... make it longer, add more wit, a better rhyme scheme and will be dope... pz
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