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Old 06-18-05, 09:14 AM   #1
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*Speaking Silently*...(Important, need feed)

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If you took away my vocal chords
And left me with pen and paper,

You'd know me ten times better,
Than if, I spoke the words.

For I speak with my mind
But write with my soul,
I speak when wise
But write with heart.

Oh, I would die, if pen, paper
And I, were apart.

You do not truly know me,
Until you've read what I've written
You can not truly understand me,
Until you analize what I've wrote.

Through writing is the key to my heart,
For pen, paper and, I, shall never part.

And if we do, you'll find
You won't know a signle thing on my mind.
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So rip out my vocal chords,
I only speak with written words.


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Old 06-23-05, 06:44 PM   #2
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uppin for this one. .
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Old 06-23-05, 07:47 PM   #3
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That was dope, I feel the same way about writing. You put yours and other poets thoughts into words in a way we all can understand, and hopefully relate to.
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Old 06-23-05, 08:05 PM   #4
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yup ..
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Old 06-24-05, 12:14 AM   #5
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this was crazy man i like its different and its exactly how i feel man good shit
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 06-24-05, 01:31 AM   #6
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thanks. uppin for more
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Old 06-24-05, 07:42 AM   #7
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Beautiful.....I think just about everyone on this site can relate to this poem, because this is what we love to do.....I'm definitely touched by this poem
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Old 06-24-05, 10:45 AM   #8
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Great poem, everything about it,this was beautifully wrtitten and very well thought out, featured.1
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