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*Speaking Silently*...(Important, need feed)
IP: C1B3 89A4
If you took away my vocal chords And left me with pen and paper, You'd know me ten times better, Than if, I spoke the words. For I speak with my mind But write with my soul, I speak when wise But write with heart. Oh, I would die, if pen, paper And I, were apart. You do not truly know me, Until you've read what I've written You can not truly understand me, Until you analize what I've wrote. Through writing is the key to my heart, For pen, paper and, I, shall never part. And if we do, you'll find You won't know a signle thing on my mind. ... So rip out my vocal chords, I only speak with written words. FEATURED~Nice Job-fluid Last edited by fluidmoon : 06-29-05 at 12:29 PM. |
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IP: 0086 7B47
uppin for this one. .
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IP: 4500 6328
That was dope, I feel the same way about writing. You put yours and other poets thoughts into words in a way we all can understand, and hopefully relate to.
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"It's the knowledge of the youth untold Our roots ungrown, so when the truth unfolds You will realize and know it's me I told you my story through the eyes of poetry I ran for the light, darkness soon banned from my life And I'd be damned for the strife but I'm as deep as my words...so I AM what I write" - Prolific |
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0086 7B47
yup ..
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IP: D681 2E32
this was crazy man i like its different and its exactly how i feel man good shit
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IP: 0086 7B47
thanks. uppin for more
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IP: 3240 794D
Beautiful.....I think just about everyone on this site can relate to this poem, because this is what we love to do.....I'm definitely touched by this poem
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IP: 0825 899A
Great poem, everything about it,this was beautifully wrtitten and very well thought out, featured.1
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