Battle Rules:

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-18-05 at 11:07 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Speats has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 10:10 PM.

MC Smoove has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-05 10:17 PM.

Lets see what i got, oh heres a lyrical remix
Messed your words,pm'ed me cuz u looking 4 a penis?
Im looking to merk some1, i thaught u were okay
Battling me is stupid like dealing at the boxingday
My flow's incredible, like every single of my punch's
Ill crush u like cereal,eat you for diner like brunch's
Still got nine minute left, aint nothing like a race
dont waiste your breath,cuz youll probly finish last place

It’s been awhile since I’ve battled..
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Take lessons in this battle kid.. cause after this..
..you’ll need some practice
Plus.. Speats can walk on water.. but then drown in wackness
Slam your punches against the wall.. but it’s your turn to fall
& I’ve seen your lifestyle.. and I didn’t know that it came in extra small
Speats came compare to this shit.. he’s not known to kill emcees
But even your state of mind.. wants to move to another country
Heard you had a little bit of talent.. but now the rest is all gone
Cause.. Speats’ only fan support left.. is what he’s resting on

lyrical and remix was two of his names before.....

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Voted For: MC Smoove

Lets see what i got, oh heres a lyrical remix
Messed your words,pm'ed me cuz u looking 4 a penis?
^^what tha hell,3rd. grader can make better shit than dat
Im looking to merk some1, i thaught u were okay
Battling me is stupid like dealing at the boxingday
^^Wak
My flow's incredible, like every single of my punch's
Ill crush u like cereal,eat you for diner like brunch's
^^waki
Still got nine minute left, aint nothing like a race
dont waiste your breath,cuz youll probly finish last
^^doesn't rhyme ...wak\

WAK verse....elemenatry kids can make better shit than dat.

Take lessons in this battle kid.. cause after this..
..you’ll need some practice
Plus.. Speats can walk on water.. but then drown in wackness
^^not the best shit..but ight
Slam your punches against the wall.. but it’s your turn to fall
& I’ve seen your lifestyle.. and I didn’t know that it came in extra small
^^mediocre
Speats came compare to this shit.. he’s not known to kill emcees
But even your state of mind.. wants to move to another country
^^wak
Heard you had a little bit of talent.. but now the rest is all gone
Cause.. Speats’ only fan support left.. is what he’s resting on
^^ight

Ur shit was basic as well...but compared to the other guy...it's a master piece.Ya got my vote.

Vote-Smoove

Voted For: MC Smoove

weak battle....

Smoove: you had sum wordplay n´a good flow...punchlinez...no....structure good...you forced sum rhymes in there too...keep improvin dawg n´start usin multis and expand your vocab...

Speats: your verse wasn´t any good dawg...you had a nice structure n´flow n´dat is the best thing I can say about your verse..you too forced sum rhymes in there...and your punchlinez mmm...nope.....your vocab was pretty simple dawg you hav to expand it .......but no worldplay dawg so....my vote is for smoove

both of you need to improve.....youl´ll get betta

smoove rtf on ma ax dogg battle..or I´ll erase the vote..sorry but thats how it is

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Keep Votin (Ill RTF)
Me Vs Ax Dogg...Dont listen to the haters..I didnt bite any line...

Me Vs Murdz

uppin this.....

uppin this.....

Voted For: MC Smoove

Pretty weak battle imo..

Take lessons in this battle kid.. cause after this..
..you’ll need some practice
Plus.. Speats can walk on water.. but then drown in wackness

GOOD WORDPLAY ATTEMPT BUT NOT A HARD PUNCH..

Slam your punches against the wall.. but it’s your turn to fall
& I’ve seen your lifestyle.. and I didn’t know that it came in extra small

DECENTISH PUNCH, GOOD CONCEPT.

Speats came compare to this shit.. he’s not known to kill emcees
But even your state of mind.. wants to move to another country

MEH....AGAIN WEAK PUNCH.

Heard you had a little bit of talent.. but now the rest is all gone
Cause.. Speats’ only fan support left.. is what he’s resting on

NICE CLOSER, BEST PUNCH OF THE BATTLE, GOOD CONCEPT, WORDPLAY AND HIT HARD.

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Lets see what i got, oh heres a lyrical remix
Messed your words,pm'ed me cuz u looking 4 a penis?

PERSONAL ATTEMPT... WACK CONCEPT BAD HIT.

Im looking to merk some1, i thaught u were okay
Battling me is stupid like dealing at the boxingday

WTF.......................

My flow's incredible, like every single of my punch's
Ill crush u like cereal,eat you for diner like brunch's

MEH...MAY BE CALLED A PUNCH.....

Still got nine minute left, aint nothing like a race
dont waiste your breath,cuz youll probly finish last place

WAS A PUNCH....BUT A BAD ONE.

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SMOOVE GETS THIS EASY IMO, HIS LAST BAR > SPEATS WHOLE VERSE.

WEAK BATTLE, SPEATS CAM HORRIBLE NO PROPER PUNCHS, AND SMOOVE HAD PUNCHES THATS WHY HE GETS MY VOTE!

RTF IN 3 DAY IN MY SIG OR THIS GETS DQ'ED!

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Voted For: MC Smoove

speats:
Lets see what i got, oh heres a lyrical remix
Messed your words,pm'ed me cuz u looking 4 a penis?
^^^LOL...GAY LINES DONT ROC NO MORE FAM SORRY
Im looking to merk some1, i thaught u were okay
Battling me is stupid like dealing at the boxingday
^^^????WHUT
My flow's incredible, like every single of my punch's
Ill crush u like cereal,eat you for diner like brunch's
^^^^WEAK...WHERE DA CREATIVITY??
Still got nine minute left, aint nothing like a race
dont waiste your breath,cuz youll probly finish last place
^^^FAM...HOW OLD R YOU SERIOUSLY..RAP LIKE A LIL ASS KIDD LOL....U JUST PROBLY NOT A BATTLE RAPPER

smoove:
Take lessons in this battle kid.. cause after this..
..you’ll need some practice
Plus.. Speats can walk on water.. but then drown in wackness
^^^LOL...I LIKE DIS NICE FLOW & PUNCH
Slam your punches against the wall.. but it’s your turn to fall
& I’ve seen your lifestyle.. and I didn’t know that it came in extra small
^^UHHH DECENT
Speats came compare to this shit.. he’s not known to kill emcees
But even your state of mind.. wants to move to another country
^^^EMCEES AND COUNTRY DONT RYHME FAM
Heard you had a little bit of talent.. but now the rest is all gone
Cause.. Speats’ only fan support left.. is what he’s resting on
^^^GOOD CLOSER...

V/SMOOVE....Y DIDN'T EVEN BATTLE DIS NIGGA LOL..DIS SHIT WAS MADD ONE SIDED...NOW I SEE Y SPEATS AUDIO RECORD IS 0-2...

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^^he's scared.lol

^emcees & country do rhyme.. uppin this