Yea yea..me an sense threw this together for y'all to peep...so plz leave good detailed feedback...its much appreciated.

Intro: Triple_N
Verse 1: Triple_N
Verse 2: Senser
Verse 3: Triple_N
Hook: Triple_N
Outro: Senser

Link to song:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplen_music.htm

Links to previously left feed:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195327
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195762

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beat is koo
the blooooaawww part of chorus is koo
but chorus is boring
Sensor good flow and delevery.
Lyrics is good too
Tiple N shined on this in the verse's

chorus is weakest part of the whole track
sensers adlibs in chorus is koo doe

8/10

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

shit tight shit........ *DLs before listenin'* word

Tri-p-l-e nigga..... lol your new sayin' shit. gangsta

1st verse: shit likin' your flow. nice lines. likin' this shit. dope delivery. Dope shit.

hook: damn, gangsta shit. likin' the gun shots.

2nd verse: damn, senser rippin' shit up. Likin' the flow. Damn the multi's. The usual tight senser shit. Damn beat tight too. lol But nice. shit likin' the multis. Liked how the beat paused when you said "pause and load my clips"

hook again, shit lovin' it. lol

3rd verse: damn changin' flow up. shit nice. Good shit. one type of flow first verse, lmao @ japanese porn line. haha good shit. dug more dirt line tight.

hook again. tight. like how senser says shit in it too. lol and you kno I like the gun shots shit. word.


lol wouldn't be a senser track without "Senserrrrrrr Mu fuckaaaaaaaaaaa" lol tight shit, yo.

overall this shit was hot. Def DLed it. word. 9.5/10 good shit. Likin' shit nicely. Both y'all held it down. On RV y'all are like the two people I listen to the most lol. So this shit was tight. I didn't feel the "I see no light" that much. it was cool, but shit was real tight. props to both. pc one.

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Beat is hard fosho. Triple just came in hard and shit. So many fuckin' punchlines man, shit is fuckin' crazy. I like the style of the song and the style of writin'. Senser was good too. multies i noticed, pretty nice. Triple came a lil' better and shit, but both were very good, the japanese porn line and vegetarian shit is crazy son. I would fuckin' bump this shit any day of the week. Hollatchaboiboi. Good fuckin' track right here. One day i will be this good.

-CJ-

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aight...

trip ya verse is sraight..flow was on point..lyrics was on point too..chorus is good..which is good..lol...Sneser...ya flow is on point too as normal...lyrics is regular..the usual hood shit...trip second verse...flow is still on point..emotion is good too...this is just a hood ass track to bounce to nah mean...good drop...

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listening..

trip: wow.. very nice multis.. lol vlery nice... this is a different style u used at the begining.. vocab dont matter in this shyt.. but its cool... good flow as usual.. and very great delivery especially at the begining..

hook: very creative hook.. thats all i could say bout dat

senser: wow.. senser.. you seriously got very good delivery.. very good flow.. and just like trips.. very creative lines...

hook....

trip:amazing as usuall.. lol.. dont know wut else to say

overall: both of ya are good.. ya always come out with amazing delivery.. and different styles and also just very amazing creativity.. props to ya.. can't wait to hear ya in the radio someday

8-9/10

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gotta say for two diff sounds yall merge kinda decent was definately feeling nthe beat but anyone with A BACKBONE WOULDVE SHIT WAS REAL SOLID NICE TO SEE TRIP BACK IN ACTION AND SENSER LIKES TO HOLD EM THEN FLOOD RV

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the beat is real good.

triple you had a good flow like always your creativty was very good nic emotion good quality hella yea im feeling your verse very good

senser you always impress me as well your quality is good emotion is good very creative props to your elevation. yall do good collaberations together i'd love to see more.

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damn... already you gettin mad replies lol... WOOOOO! i know this is fire i aint gotta listen to it to tell u that with this roster lol... but here we go n e ways...

i heard this beat alot, this is that rock it beat rite? woo kid mixtape shyt rite? yea good choice... lol ya flow is hardcore.. i think ya strongest point is ya voice ferreal.. u rap like a beast nnn... lol damn ima run for cover if i ever see you in tha streets n we have beef lol.... wooo senser switched up i love that little pause... lol this shit is illllll!!!!!! yo sense is killin it!!! multis and flow is crazy!!!! voice is changin lately, u really becoming original with ur delivery... i think tha chorus is cool, its simple just nyce samples i like shyt like that... trip is in again lol, flow is better this time around some good lines... lol pubes in japanese porn.. lol damn u killin it here towards the end with the flow n multis... damn yo, we're gonna have to get on another track asap ... that goes to both of u guys lol... damn this is tha best thing i've seen dropped on rv in months in my oppinion... ha hahaha there goes sense again sensaaa mutha fuckaaazz!! damn u r crazy maaaaann... u know thissss!! fuck yea good as track guys!

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Beat: yeah i like it
Voices: triple...u know i like your voice,...senser...mmm pretty dope yeah
Flow's: damn triple...fuck its dope...wow senser u fucking dope
Quality: both is dope as hell
Lyrics: like vegetarian...leave beef on the table...lol damnnnm.... pretty dope
Hook: oh yeah fucking dope
Overall: 9/10

Shit was nice, 1st i though the same as tony, 2 different sounds ya'll put it together nicely

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haha yeah this some fire here...this the first time i hear the track completed shits serious man good job on the sound effects Trip...but yeah thx for the supportive feedback i appreciate it dearly ..all i gots to say is thx for peepin my tracks lately thats whats hood and i gots love for you just cuz of that..na'mean but yeah Trip we did it again holla at me kid 1ne...

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Listening through Audio Technica's ATHM40fs's.

Beat's ok. Kinda Dre-ish. Trip's verse came in somewhat monotone. Lyrics were there, just seemed liek you were just going through the motions to bang out the track.

Hook, not feeling it. It was SUPER low energy except for the "blaw" and the gunshot portion of it. Just seemed flat.

Senser's verse came in with some higher energy. Lyrical content was average and didn't pop out like "wow, nice one" or anything like that.

Trip, third verse's punches had a little higher energy deliv and the lines had far more impact than the first verse. The whole song just seemed liek a slap together IMO. I seen both of yall come better than this. Not that it was "bad" it just didn't move me or stand out in my honest opinion. Just a typical track. Sounded like you guy's interpretation of a g-unit track.

RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...391#post2226391

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yea this was pretty cool minus the hook you guys coulda did a lil better on te hook...
well wut can i say both of ya flows was on point delivery was gud just the hook needed more.....all in all about 8.5/10 track gud shit yo