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Old 06-24-05, 07:34 AM   #1
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Exclamation Yo Read This Piece!!!

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196606

On my last piece i was told that my flow was too basic,
Insinuating that my efforts on this shit are wasted,
People need to understand that that's the way i'm rhymin,
Self-confessed, in the process of elevating, still climbin,
Yo i think i'll take this shit one stage at a time,
Til the point of mad hype every time i post a rhyme,
Yo i've battled higher elevated cats n lost without care,
Yeh i've taken mad blows, but it's helpin me prepare,
For the point in time when i come and shine through,
To every cat who told me i was wack, i thank you,
Ain't even bein sarcastic, i mean that on the real,
Thanks for showing my blind ass all of my achilles' heels,
Most y'all don't say it out of hate so i appreciate it,
Yeh i got a lot shit to work on, can't debate it,
Good things come to those who wait, so bear that shit in mind,
But i'm goin slow, even if initially fallin behind,
So call me shit or wack or basic if you need,
Y'all give the Souljah motivation to succeed.....

Peace

~Souljah~

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Old 06-24-05, 12:04 PM   #2
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i liked this man, one of your best, good flow to it, keep it up
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Old 06-24-05, 07:00 PM   #4
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thanx people.
uppin for more feedback................
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Old 06-25-05, 05:03 AM   #5
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uppin uppin uppin......................................
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Old 06-25-05, 06:10 AM   #6
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this was really good....im glad we squashed our beef...btw.....good shit overall...7/10...we shd collabo....but kon is still a wanksta
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Old 06-25-05, 06:59 AM   #7
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lol thanks g. yeh we shuld collabo for real
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Old 06-25-05, 07:59 AM   #8
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yeah kl....im thinkin of summin...get at me on msn.....

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