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Old 06-27-05, 05:03 PM   #1
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The Lines Of Time

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I have books full of pages that are tattered and torn
upon them the words I've written are faded and worn
Reminders of my hopes and dreams
and distant fading memories
Opening windows into my frame of mind
and opinions I've formed through out time
Deep dark horrifying dreams
and alluring fantasys
My life lies upon these pages
Like the lines upon my face
that as I'm ageing
Take thier place
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Old 06-28-05, 11:14 PM   #2
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Nice poem, short and sweet, to the point. Glad to see new members posting up,keep dropping.1
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Old 06-29-05, 02:27 AM   #3
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thanks for the feed back
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