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Old 07-05-05, 03:52 PM   #1
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DAY DREAMING aT tHE cLUB

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dAYDREAMING aT tHE cLUB

Wine is treasure when I rhyme for pleasure please pass
The glass got the room alarmed with Boone farm fast
See a hot honey and she’s not for money just a fine ass
Sweaty and unique ready to compete for a tonguing kiss
I’m clearly thug but nearly in love this is merely a club twist
If Her coo-chee real juicy let it spill need energetic skills
In rap want her to chill in my lap in bed never regret it, will
She let me buy drinks? I try think, I’ll put on a three piece
Suit just to feast with this cute the more I see increase
My desire, must rap wise try capitalize and zap her pies
Before another brother snap eyes on her yap crap and lies
Surprised not expert but think that’s a very hot skirt
The cutie’s booty pop and flirt now my cock is alert
Just see her in a sexy fitting gown just sitting down
On my leg start to beg make a true pledge to marry her renown
“Oh lady troy I wanna baby boy what do I do”? MADD I’ll
Teach you” she’s a peach true she let me reach through her
Her panties “now rub the fat juicy lips of my cooch” hairs soft like fur
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Old 07-05-05, 04:18 PM   #2
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madd rapper this was actually pretty good.
but the only reason noone feeds ur shit is cause you never feed anyone else's.
and you gotta leave links and shit.On some real shit man you gotta feed.

tho you probably will just ignore this. peace
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Old 07-05-05, 05:18 PM   #3
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Old 07-05-05, 05:19 PM   #4
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Indeph THANKS FOR THE CRITIQUE AND THE FEED FOR REAL
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Old 07-05-05, 05:26 PM   #5
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no problem.....
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