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No Crew Votes
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C-Hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 12:12 AM.

*lost to: SouljaBoy, Escalade
*jump for joy is a charity for cancer patients


takin my lines..like my 'spit' caught in ya thorat/
this nigga chief pm me beggin for a vote/...he caught!

like we curing cancer my niggas 'jump for joy'/*
ya mom..she mad talkin bout she should of sold-ya-boy,(souljaBoy)

if you worked at Mcdonalds you couldn't be a 'M.C.'/
you a ol head on the board n still tryin to herb newbies/

this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde

ya crew is a joke...they flow as good as a waste pipe/
chief get R.iped like toilet paper cuz his crew is full of A.ss W.ipes...


E.Z....aight g/l in yo verse

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Chief has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 09:31 AM.

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde
wtf????
chief won but i dont feel like explaining

Voted For: Chief

takin my lines..like my 'spit' caught in ya thorat/
this nigga chief pm me beggin for a vote/...he caught!
.....aight opener weak thoguh 2/10
like we curing cancer my niggas 'jump for joy'/*
ya mom..she mad talkin bout she should of sold-ya-boy,(souljaBoy)
....weak concept 2/10
if you worked at Mcdonalds you couldn't be a 'M.C.'/
you a ol head on the board n still tryin to herb newbies/
...lol nice punch 6/10
this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde
aight nice but kinda played though 4/10
ya crew is a joke...they flow as good as a waste pipe/
chief get R.iped like toilet paper cuz his crew is full of A.ss W.ipes...
aight good....closer 6/10

Total.....20/50.....not that good man u need to work on ur punches and the delivery to ur lines so they can connect and use better concepts on it as well u have a nice flow wit this vverse but can be better.....keep it up u got potential.....


Ayo, I stand tall, it’s like I’m a “tennis ball” and you be
A tennis player with a “broken wrist” who can’t “serve me”
....lol good opener... 6/10
Ain’t no way you can see me visually and lyrically I’ll eat ya
See, facial clues gave me the idea, now “eye” “nose” I beat ya
wack concept but pulled it out though 4/10
I’ve known him from RW, I was ranked lower, this is my time to hate
Your “name” is the big question, now when “chood” he elevate?
ok kinda forced there 4/10
This is just a game of baseball and you’re the first to get hit
Only time you “succeed” is when you eating “pips”
....lol nice wordplay i get it... 6/10
I’ve been travelling and capturing many people on the map
And you resemble a “state” from the way I “tour” you in half
...lol nice closer..6/10

TOTAL 28/50......ok u did good here nice verse.....u got some punches here and there and well connected and nice worplay as well.....keep it up....u did good try to work a lil on vocab aight.....and thats all u did good.....

v// Sheif....jus a better verse wit more punches nad wordplay.....good battle keep them up and keep elevatin both

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Voted For: Chief

Chief:

Ayo, I stand tall, it’s like I’m a “tennis ball” and you be
A tennis player with a “broken wrist” who can’t “serve me”
^^decent meta 5/10
Ain’t no way you can see me visually and lyrically I’ll eat ya
See, facial clues gave me the idea, now “eye” “nose” I beat ya
^^dope bar 8/10
I’ve known him from RW, I was ranked lower, this is my time to hate
Your “name” is the big question, now when “chood” he elevate?
^^good bar 6/10
This is just a game of baseball and you’re the first to get hit
Only time you “succeed” is when you eating “pips”
^^decent wordplay 5/10
I’ve been travelling and capturing many people on the map
And you resemble a “state” from the way I “tour” you in half
^^nice closer 7/10

Overall: 33/50 (66%)

C-Hood:

takin my lines..like my 'spit' caught in ya thorat/
this nigga chief pm me beggin for a vote/...he caught!
^^decent bar 4/10
like we curing cancer my niggas 'jump for joy'/*
ya mom..she mad talkin bout she should of sold-ya-boy,(souljaBoy)
^^good bar 6/10
if you worked at Mcdonalds you couldn't be a 'M.C.'/
you a ol head on the board n still tryin to herb newbies/
^^no 1/10
this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde
^^good play 6/10
ya crew is a joke...they flow as good as a waste pipe/
chief get R.iped like toilet paper cuz his crew is full of A.ss W.ipes...
^^decent closer 4/10

Overall: 21/50 (42%)


Vote: Chief


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Voted For: Chief

takin my lines..like my 'spit' caught in ya thorat/
this nigga chief pm me beggin for a vote/...he caught!
^^^DId he?.....post it for proof
like we curing cancer my niggas 'jump for joy'/*
ya mom..she mad talkin bout she should of sold-ya-boy,(souljaBoy)
^^^If ya was battlin soulfa it woulda worked
if you worked at Mcdonalds you couldn't be a 'M.C.'/
you a ol head on the board n still tryin to herb newbies/
^^^UMM....OK I guess
this verse is charity like lil kids on the corner sellin lemonade/
if you owned a cadilac you still wouldn't be able to escolayde
^^^^weak...........
ya crew is a joke...they flow as good as a waste pipe/
chief get R.iped like toilet paper cuz his crew is full of A.ss W.ipes...
^^^Lmao....this was Hot!!

U had some attempts at personals that woulda been effective if they were posted and proven.Get rid of the "/"And take out the extra bar between every bar.Only hot line was last one.

Ayo, I stand tall, it’s like I’m a “tennis ball” and you be
A tennis player with a “broken wrist” who can’t “serve me”
^^didn't need to explain this line as it was basic and shit
Ain’t no way you can see me visually and lyrically I’ll eat ya
See, facial clues gave me the idea, now “eye” “nose” I beat ya
^^^Played out wordplay...a nose/knows line??Please
I’ve known him from RW, I was ranked lower, this is my time to hate
Your “name” is the big question, now when “chood” he elevate?
^^^Good......1st line wasn't good...why bring that shit up?
This is just a game of baseball and you’re the first to get hit
Only time you “succeed” is when you eating “pips”
^^OK word fission here
I’ve been travelling and capturing many people on the map
And you resemble a “state” from the way I “tour” you in half
^^Good wordplay

You had some nice wordplay and all.But where the fuck are the personals!?!?!?!?!?!?Had some played lines.Good flow and structure.Why bring up that he ranked higher than you?Tryna diss yaself homie?Do it in Open Mic.But I give ya this for better punches.

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Voted For: Chief

Chief:

Ayo, I stand tall, it’s like I’m a “tennis ball” and you be
A tennis player with a “broken wrist” who can’t “serve me”
Very good opening..

Ain’t no way you can see me visually and lyrically I’ll eat ya
See, facial clues gave me the idea, now “eye” “nose” I beat ya
Very good punch

I’ve known him from RW, I was ranked lower, this is my time to hate
Your “name” is the big question, now when “chood” he elevate?
Nice wordplay.....

This is just a game of baseball and you’re the first to get hit
Only time you “succeed” is when you eating “pips”
a nice punch but wasnt quite feelin it.

I’ve been travelling and capturing many people on the map
And you resemble a “state” from the way I “tour” you in half
Very nice closure


I liked your opening and closure....the punches were pretty d0pe ....wome of them made me laugh...
Ur vocab work was dropped nicely...thats all thank you



Vote: Chief

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wome of them made me laugh...
its meant to be some of them made me laugh

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Can't vote . . . but nice drop by both . . good luck

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff