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Old 07-14-05, 06:35 PM   #1
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Whats Good Wit Da Hate??...I Make 'Trees Move'...Without Limbs On Da Skates
I'm Cussin Police While U Fuckin Da Jakes!...Killin U Now...Bring Ya Cousin At 8!
I 'Practice Fair' Like Homos Rehearsin, Unidentified Sex.......So 4 U 'ITS' Hurtin! *
Lonely Bastards Lookin 4 DADS 2 Jerk-Em...Plant Jobs? Ya SEEDS Ain Workin!
Fuck Ya Phonelines....My Tones More....Heard, Press *69 If Ya Dont 'RE-CALL'!
White Grounds? Have Ya Blank Fall, Murda Bathrooms....Kill U In Da Same-Stall!
Mimic Nite?....Mufucka Ya Not Me, Ask 'JOE' Like Fred I Left His Face 'SLOPPY'!
I Should Be In Ya Top 3.....Whos 1-1-O-Three?......'LIQUOR'D-A' So I 'SHOT-B'! *
Look Around Son I Seek Respect...Ya 'Shake More Dicks' Than SEIZURED-SEX!
Turned Red & Black Like Card Decks...Put 'Money On West' Like 'KANYE-BETS'!
Bars Plus Arms Do Flex, U Da 'Virgin-Type'..........I'll Be Da 1st 2 'POP YA TEXT'!
Talk About Terrorism...Im Involved In Threats, Wait 4 Future...Ima PALM U NEXT!
Witout Shoes I Outrun MCS....U Act Wit Ya Throat....I'm Leavin U On Ya Knees!
I Swarm In Da Form Of Bees....Cuz Nite Smoke 'LEUKEMIA' Like Lung Disease!
Barricade A Heart Then Disect It.......Like Bad News.......U Just Gotta Accept It!
Unknown illness But My Bars Infected...Ya Lifes Like Tapes.....Always Ejected!
Tight Bars....How Can Ya Not Respect Him??...Off Top.....Never Lift A Pen Man
I'm A Sin Fam, Nobody Wanna 'CROSS' Me....Like Jesus Apart Of Dey Religion!
Bitch U A Bird...Demonstrate Pigeons, 'Cough Up Guards'...In A 'Flem-Position'!
Call Me Stupid, But I Coulda Sworn Ya 'Minds Made Up'....Like 'Final-Decisions'!
Next Time I Wreck Da Booth....Ya Mouth'll Drop So Hard U Might Chip Ya Tooth
Reality??, My Words All Truth...Chea Yall Approach Da Top...Walkin On Roofs!
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Old 07-14-05, 11:30 PM   #2
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Old 07-15-05, 05:52 AM   #3
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wht u mean what link do i need to drop
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Old 07-15-05, 11:03 AM   #4
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Old 07-15-05, 11:04 AM   #5
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Old 07-15-05, 05:34 PM   #6
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this was pretty good, ya had a nice flow but i dont know why you got ya bars all over the place like that. some ok metas in there, work on ya multies tho they kinda choppy but overall i give it a 7.5/10 holla at me
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