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Old 07-10-05, 03:36 PM   #1
Illang
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time..

IP: BCF0 5EA6

vacant stretches of sequences, run along a track..
of nothing, while minutes embodied by granules of..
sand, bellow and snatch at air in the caged time..
glass, where hours topple minutes in a heap of..
golden tokens, where a glazed eye gazes dense..
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was bored, so i keyed this up..
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Old 07-10-05, 03:44 PM   #2
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i liked it..not long,and gives me a iunno a kinda weird feel not a bad 1 a good 1...i liked it keep it up
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