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Check in by: 07-04-05 at 09:29 PM

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flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 09:29 PM.

Dopium has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 09:30 PM.

your battle record is fucked 1&2 soon to be 1&3
cus when this turns to k.onfliktz my verse burns ya like its 9th degree
havin you call M.C firetruck in here to hoes u off
cus my verse leave u whipped from cough (1)
look at his name this kid cant even flow his own verse
he can reimberse his way in a black hearse
Son you better bow down and say your prayers
cus my lines leave ya handicapped more then old fucks in wheelchairs


(Explaination for 1 line)

(1)Ok jus for line 1 it means Whipping cough get it.

Dopium creative . . . is that your pseudonym for opium
Well that is what you gonna need
To handle the pain I’m gonna leave
You might be on drugs but I aint no allusion
I’m like a concussion leave with straight confusion
and only when I take dope will I think ur lines are dope
Cuz cat the only time u be above me is if we act out a scene from a civil right movie . . . and go hang on a rope

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

WOW I straight up KO'd This Slut we uppin for sum votes ppl.

Voted For: Dopium

Dopium won for having structure.

Peace.

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ight ppl we uppin this lets get sum more votes goin ok.

Cmon ppl dont leave me hangin lets get sum votes poppin off.

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin this ppl.

cmon ppl we uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn this ok.

Voted For: Dopium

honestly
this battle was awful

flowverse your shit was just horrifying...
no punches really, i guess you had a few poor attempts but nothing good...
absolutely no flow
reall i jsut dont know where to start, elevate man

dopium
yours was at least somewhat decent, even so your shit wasnt that good...
flow was kinda ehh, not very consistant, at all..
it was off in some points, on in some points...
incorporating rv was kinda pointless, although it was creative so you get points there...
but you punches werent really that great either, they were just...better

like i said, pretty weak battle
but dopium pulled out the win, cause his shit was jus flat out better...
v/ dopium

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cmon ppl were uppppin for votes plz ight.

Voted For: Dopium

your battle record is fucked 1&2 soon to be 1&3
cus when this turns to k.onfliktz my verse burns ya like its 9th degree
^^umm.....lame....2/10
havin you call M.C firetruck in here to hoes u off
cus my verse leave u whipped from cough (1)
^^didn't flow nice....4/10
look at his name this kid cant even flow his own verse
he can reimberse his way in a black hearse
^^^too basic.......3/10
Son you better bow down and say your prayers
cus my lines leave ya handicapped more then old fucks in wheelchairs
^^^OK...lil unoriginal.....4/10

A buch a below average punchlines here.First bar....ya seemed to be kissin Konflictz and 9th. degree's ass.2nd bar was ight....but didn't flow well enough.3rd bar was too basic.4 th bar was uncreative.YA need to step up.

Dopium creative . . . is that your pseudonym for opium
Well that is what you gonna need
^^^where the punch.....0/10
To handle the pain I’m gonna leave
You might be on drugs but I aint no allusion
^^didn't rhyme....0/10
I’m like a concussion leave with straight confusion
and only when I take dope will I think ur lines are dope
^^^rhyming dope with dope?.....0/10
Cuz cat the only time u be above me is if we act out a scene from a civil right movie . . . and go hang on a rope
^^nope....0/10

U structure suked.90% of ur bars didn't rhyme.No punches except for the last line which suked.Flow suked.Vocab suked.No creativity.Read the tutorials and figure out wat a punchline is.

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