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Check in by: 07-06-05 at 08:46 PM

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.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 08:49 PM.

HoTgIrL06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 09:26 PM.

HoTgIrL06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 09:28 PM.

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It's tha one and only HoTgIrL, bringin u alot of tension.
Afta I get thru beatin u, yo head will be shaped like Bart's on The Simpsons.

I'm tryna figure out, how da hell u got da name MURDZ.
Did u make that up, while in da bathroom lettin out TURDZ?

What's wrong, are u sad cause u can't get a girl?
I guess u better holla at Shena- nae, cause I heard she rocks worlds.

Wen I get thru, yo record will neva be da same.
I'm like a scary movie, I'll leave u havin dreams, like The Game.

Yea u kinda fat, but it's okay to be.
But if u wanna lose weight, u betta lose control like Missy.

I seen sum of yo punchlines an I think dey kinda corney.
Mines will punch u in da face, n have u sayin I love u, like Barney.

Don't get mad, none of da girls like u, cause u chubby.
Just turn gay, and carry a red bag, like the purple teletubbie.

I'm finish...I'm done...u wanna be master.
I bet after u lose, u'll turn friendly like casper...Chea I'm out

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gud battle..... uppin dis yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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vote vote vote vote vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: .Murdz.

ok an aight battle yea murdz u got it though u had an ill flow and structure and punches were connectin and hittin hard almost made her bleed....lol but yea HG06 u did aight but need to improve aight u got potential but murdz gots my vote

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werd, thanks upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnn

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iight...c'mon yall vote, vote, vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ya'll can we getz sum votez up in here??????

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Voted For: .Murdz.

HoTgIrL06 verse

It's tha one and only HoTgIrL, bringin u alot of tension.
Afta I get thru beatin u, yo head will be shaped like Bart's on The Simpsons.
^ no rhyme...self-g punch = played...wack bar

I'm tryna figure out, how da hell u got da name MURDZ.
Did u make that up, while in da bathroom lettin out TURDZ?
^ wack...no originality punch = no there no personal

What's wrong, are u sad cause u can't get a girl?
I guess u better holla at Shena- nae, cause I heard she rocks worlds.
Same again

Wen I get thru, yo record will neva be da same.
I'm like a scary movie, I'll leave u havin dreams, like The Game.

Yea u kinda fat, but it's okay to be.
But if u wanna lose weight, u betta lose control like Missy.

I seen sum of yo punchlines an I think dey kinda corney.
Mines will punch u in da face, n have u sayin I love u, like Barney.

Don't get mad, none of da girls like u, cause u chubby.
Just turn gay, and carry a red bag, like the purple teletubbie.

I'm finish...I'm done...u wanna be master.
I bet after u lose, u'll turn friendly like casper...Chea I'm out

Overall
I stopped early because to be honest this was a typical newb verse full of self-glorified bars & weak punches...potentials there but i think you need to focus more on dissing your opponent than sayin stuff like

"I'm like a scary movie, I'll leave u havin dreams, like The Game"

^ who cares what you are lol...keep elevating

.Murdz. Verse

lets go ahead and weigh this out, a lightweight is who waged this bout
but ill leave you full of dents similar to the moons crater count
^ -_- self glorified bar...coulda been better

im blastin at a hata, these people know my flow has ya waiting
ill put so many caps in the air that you'll think ya graduating
^ nice bar...but not a battle bar so weak in here on this occasion

the day that you beat me is the day god and satan slow dance
and hold hands in romance ... so ya basically theres no chance
^

so go back to ya notepad and start jottin down your wack rhymes
cause you wouldve been better off no showing, like suntans on black guys
you tried to cum hard, but my rhymes givin you a sex change,
you'd think i was the DC Sniper the way i so easily wreck-brains
like sparrows that are landin i think this bitch elevated wrong
cuz when people start votin for me she'll tell us she's hated on
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[b]Overall
Meh...i stopped early again coz your verse basically had the same shit as the other kids...but i guess you won on less played shit but this was a wack battle...

V/.Murdz. RTF in 3 days or vote removed

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