Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-23-05 at 11:08 PM

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-fresh- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 10:25 PM.

eazy.....

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 10:35 PM.

how can you call yaself fresh when you fail to impress
take the exit man cuz my words will leave you stressed
you caress ass homie all ya flows are so damn phonie
So i'll beat ur head so hard and you won't even know me
your not even good at text so take hit the road
your the most wackest kid across the gloab
ya spit wid no flow people take ya raps for jokes
so spit something just watch this bitch choke
while I choke ya throat get ur ass fuckin smoked
your not even worth my time cuz you is broke

nice verse man, good luck to this flyweight

both good drops....fresh u deff got some nice multi's in there also some very good vocab .... tech you had some good punches but i dont wanan vote cause its just how i feel at the moment

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this was funny cuz that fresh dude has ripped lines from eminem lol.

uppin.............................................

Voted For: -fresh-

weak here...if the lines were longer it wuda prolly been better...but here's a lil break down...


Technique :

how can you call yaself fresh when you fail to impress
take the exit man cuz my words will leave you stressed

^^ first line was ok but the second line was wack 4/10

you caress ass homie all ya flows are so damn phonie
So i'll beat ur head so hard and you won't even know me

^^ 3rd line str8 didnt make sense...how can he carasse ass and his lines be phony?....3/10

your not even good at text so take hit the road
your the most wackest kid across the gloab

^^played...it wuda been ok but didnt rhyme...if u had written globe the way it shud be it wuda rhymed...like that sounds like glo-ab 5/10

ya spit wid no flow people take ya raps for jokes
so spit something just watch this bitch choke
while I choke ya throat get ur ass fuckin smoked
your not even worth my time cuz you is broke

^^those were stretched....wasnt really feeling them...but ima be nice 6/10

Overall : ur verse seemed rushed without noeffort...didnt hav atleast one solid punch...but the positive of ur verse is that it had an ok flow...


Fresh

Materially, killing serially, clearly you'll see
How much in fear when u hear me you'll be

^^aimless..u forced the multis...4/10

ahhh cant be assed copying and pasting..soim summarize sayin fresh had more voab..most of his lines were too familiar(played)...but atleast he had this on track...his punches hit harder and wordplay was there compared to tech...flow was off...u need a better structure but u get this for a better verse with more punches and wordplay...


pming strobe or asking to take this vote off aint hard...so holla at mine with a wel lxplained vote linx in my sig...wun

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1-0 me

ahhh fuck'a 50 character........................

you shupid cunt his lines were taken from eminems song open mic...

Lmao.

And you thought you could beat me?

That verse sucked yo.

you lost bitch.I won't vote tho.U prolly gonna bitch 'n moan and say it's hate.