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Old 07-20-05, 01:51 AM   #1
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Styles P (Feat. Traidmarx) - My Life Remix

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this the 1st time i've tried the remix... mixing type shit so its not the greatest but didn't turn out horrible let me know what ya think.


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Old 07-20-05, 02:19 AM   #2
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Old 07-20-05, 11:12 AM   #3
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peepin.. i love the original with pharoh monch...ya flow is actually really nyce, some mixing issues here n there nothin big.. but yea ya sound comfortable on tha mic good shyt to me, you should post up ya shyt here from now on...
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Old 07-20-05, 11:25 AM   #4
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Always been a fan of the original song, and your remix isnt too bad man. I like your voice, sounds really good over this beat. Quality actually isn't that bad...Flow slips a time or two, but overall, its really good man. Lyrics are nice, multies are good...

Overall, Hot shit man
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Old 07-20-05, 11:27 AM   #5
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voice sounds nice over the beat, you got a few flow mistakes, a lil' mixing errors here and there, but not too bad.. you comfortable on the mic which is good... keep workin and droppin your works in the forum... see ya around, kid..
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Old 07-20-05, 11:28 AM   #6
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thanks man good lookin out on the feedback
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Old 07-20-05, 11:46 AM   #7
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Flow was on and off, but u did sound nice on this i dont know if this is traid from uf back in da dayz...and also the site Q was on 411hype wuteva it was..but the mixing was a lil off aswell but ya presence is nice..
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Old 07-20-05, 11:47 AM   #8
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Old 07-20-05, 11:51 AM   #9
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yea this is the same traidmarx from uf and from 411hype
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Old 07-21-05, 01:55 AM   #10
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uppin this right here......
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Old 07-21-05, 03:41 PM   #11
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WHATS UP TRAID..THIS IS jane blaze..boi..
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Old 07-21-05, 03:50 PM   #12
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do i know you ????
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Old 07-21-05, 08:02 PM   #13
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Ok remix. Your voice goes well with the beat, but I'm not sure if I like this song. The vocals seem off. Lyrics are good, flow was off a little. But I would play this, but not in public. Just in my house or on my boombox at home.
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Old 07-22-05, 01:13 AM   #14
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aiiight man good lookin out
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Old 07-22-05, 09:50 AM   #15
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this a hot as song kid lets see if you dont mess it up..no offense.....
ok its playin...styles rippin it like i expected..lol...iight i think you might be up now..
yeah..lyrics arent bad...only thing ya 3rd and 4th bar sounded rushed...and swallow some of ya spit homie i hear it lingerin in ya mouth..lol ..its coo though its a good verse..just seems alil short?...good lil mix either way i used to do this alot mix into industry cats songs and what not...peep my page www.soundclick.com/bronxskid iight homie practice a bit more and try uppin ya quality to match the vocals on a lil remix like this and youll be iight na'mean 1ne..
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