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5 | 62.50% |
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3 | 37.50% |
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Lyrical Mage vs C-Hood
IP: 0825 899A
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6 - 6-12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting verse due 1 hour after check-in aight lets get to it Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-18-05 at 10:55 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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C-Hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 10:57 AM.
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IP: 0825 899A
*won one battle against tommy gunz
*lost to one mic, over dose, and effect lacin up ya jordans only way you touch "one mic"(mike)/ you gettin a 'over dose' from my lyrics so you feelin the 'effect's cuz i'm that tyght/ forget football....you aren't able to pass my line of scr'image'/ and ya skills are unable to be seen cuz they are a lyrical i'mage'/ i be 'high' on them 'tree's like a christamas star/* you found in my hood n imma treat you like my avatar/ punches landin and they come bright like lights on a police car/ they'll make you 'sit' 'calm'(com) and that i'll be the only way you'll become a t.v. star/ when you see me spar...you betta duck ya dumb fuck/ ya rhymes are forced..imma catch you in new jersey to see how your rhymes are 'stuck'/** * yall know on chritmas how yall put the star on the top of the tree?!?! **new jersey NETS- don't get it don't vote
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IP: F3DC 577C
lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 07:22 PM.
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IP: F3DC 577C
told hood to jack some people but dont get your shoes muddy
but kid rather stay home and get cream from jackin his buddy ready to die? let a nigga like me set the date bring my mac-10 and let him rise as a real flyweight c wished he lived in atlanta so he put down b-town yet again another n-sync wannabe just like o-town c thinks its fun to fuck Crack sniffin bitches that look good but gets stds like that nigga on Boyz In The HOOD nigga you aint shit 16 and still trying to hustle last time this nigga tried he pulled a calve muscle kid using pre written and thinks i cant stop it but ive heard better lines from andy milinokis |
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IP: F3DC 577C
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IP: 4528 4087
yo sorry for being late i got off when you didnt answer
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IP: CF4E 8780
Voted For: lyrical mage
lm. eh an alright battle but i really think you could have done alot more with it. the only thing i was really feeling was your closer. but otherwise you need to up your vocab and work on your structure alot more. the wordplay was alright.. there were not that many metas. i think one the o-town line. but besides that an alright verse. just work on your stuff a little more and elevate.. c-hood- this was all over the place. and you have alot of work to do . umm first off if you need to explain it.. don't use it, the rhyme scheme was very forced so the flow wasnt as on target as LM's overall though you have alot of work ahead of you also next time run a spell check. it dosent help the cause when you mispell a few words. ok verse but needs alot of work for having the better verse-LM
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IP: 4528 4087
uppin on this right hear ya heard kid its the rock......SIKE!
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: ACF5 7522
Voted For: lyrical mage
ur flow was better but its still pretty basic work on it work on ur metaphores personals too try out for cs c hood work on ur structure u have alot of filler in some of ur lines ur metaphoresw are probably some of the worst ive seen u have no good personals and u p ur vocab
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IP: 07CE F36B
uppin on this yo
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