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07-18-05, 12:35 AM
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Epihany
IP: 59A2 9AA1
Cursin the day He led you away
our love lost going astray Forever gone, and memories fray, never again seeing the beautiful rays of day. Oh! the blackness you seek, with sorrow I speak. Your body still beautiful today even though now frail and weak. Oh! We weep for your life, that He now keeps As we lower you 6 feet into the ground we weep.
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07-18-05, 12:44 AM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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this was good, a lil short, but good, imagery was the key thing i saw here, overall this was a good read, keep it up
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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