Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding.

First to 3 votes, equals a K.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 07-25-05 at 09:49 AM

Must drop verse in 55 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Keyweezy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 09:20 AM.

Consensus has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 09:21 AM.

You're ill? Kid, I'll feed you with toxins just to see you vomit.
Be honest, watching "Sesame" proves to be your only street knowledge.
Dopeness I'm portraying, intent to drop decent Con's betraying.
So I'll swipe his legs clean off, so no further steps can be taken!
I'll end it now, methods of whoring? I jab at their chins quick.
& combining punches w/ rusty nails, just so you can get the hang of it.

Done. If you don't get the wordplay/punches please don't vote. Again, if nothing in my verse makes sense to you do not vote.

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Goodluck...

100% rec, bitch you got wack punches and low flow
Oh I remember, you won that topical by a no show
Go find some personals, I did my homework on you!
Your opponent didnt drop...
...Thats the only reason you didnt lose
You use vets concepts, thinkin your problems are solved
They were used years ago...
...They're played now coz we all evolved


Just summat quick

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Consensus

Voted For: Keyweezy

well it was a good battle all around...had me wanting more



Keyweezy- verse was nice....i like the line wit the sesame thing...had some real nice punches...had a lil personal wit the first line of the verse...good verse all around.....8/10




Consensus: your verse was nice....kinda of stayed on the same subject about hs no-show wit had me bored...but the personals were good...and the punches were ok...nice verse though for a key.....7/10

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

Thanks for the vote. Upping this yo...............

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Voted For: Keyweezy

key won this one hands down... con's verse was extremely basic which made it very hard to compete with key's verse. key came wit punches and a consistant flow to take the win. although his verse wasnt the best ever, it was decent enough to win it. con's simple concepts were easy to bypass and the .........................'s that he used really made his verse look even worse. key's best line was tha sesame street line even though it was really played. key had some decent wordplay like that nail and get tha hang of it... it wasnt that hard hitting but it was nice wordplay which con couldnt, or rather didnt compete with
V/ Keyweezy

Yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooo.

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Voted For: Consensus

your verses was aiight i guess but you need to elevate a bit........
your punches were good and so was your opning and closure.......
structure was nice...

this was a good battle...............keep on elevatin.....






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Voted For: Keyweezy

Aii

Key

You're ill? Kid, I'll feed you with toxins just to see you vomit.
Be honest, watching "Sesame" proves to be your only street knowledge.
lol damn that was Funny Lol Good bar
Dopeness I'm portraying, intent to drop decent Con's betraying.
So I'll swipe his legs clean off, so no further steps can be taken!
Yeah That was Better Than The first one nice Wordplay
I'll end it now, methods of whoring? I jab at their chins quick.
& combining punches w/ rusty nails, just so you can get the hang of it
...Nice....
Overall man You had a dope verse some lines couldve been better but considering that you are sort of new to the site thats really good stuff man You got some talent 4real

You get my vote in this battle
BUt if you dont RTF b4 the day is out i will get this vote removed

Con
100% rec, bitch you got wack punches and low flow
Oh I remember, you won that topical by a no show
.....Aii Personal...
Go find some personals, I did my homework on you!
Your opponent didnt drop...
...Thats the only reason you didnt lose
....Why are you Resayin What You already said? Thats wack man
You use vets concepts, thinkin your problems are solved
They were used years ago...
...They're played now coz we all evolved
....Weak./....
overall man i Know that your verse couldve been alot more better and you used the same concept back to back talkin bout the same thang Thats Not good man that shows that you dont know how to use your personals and thats wack yo so I coudnt give you my vote in this battle man so srry

Voted For: Keyweezy

Easy win for Keyweezy...

Con:

100% rec, bitch you got wack punches and low flow
Oh I remember, you won that topical by a no show

Decent personal

Go find some personals, I did my homework on you!
Your opponent didnt drop...
...Thats the only reason you didnt lose

Isnt that repeating what you just said??

You use vets concepts, thinkin your problems are solved
They were used years ago...
...They're played now coz we all evolved

Decent...

Overall, you didnt really come that hard...You showed some potential, but I could tell that you didnt really try. Next time, try being more consistant with some original concepts.

Keyweezy:

You're ill? Kid, I'll feed you with toxins just to see you vomit.
Be honest, watching "Sesame" proves to be your only street knowledge

Lol good...

Dopeness I'm portraying, intent to drop decent Con's betraying.
So I'll swipe his legs clean off, so no further steps can be taken!

Nice punch, set up was blah

Dope...

Overall, you really shined in this one man. You had pretty much everything going for you

V/ Keyweezy

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