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Check in by: 08-05-05 at 07:00 PM

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blackfrostbite has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 07:03 PM.

check it,picture dis scenario/
you bout as straight as MJ wit a pink scarf,cut-off blue jeans,wit some pink boots on,enlisted in da gay rodeo/
you da type to be a scientist so you expirenment by suckin all da dill pickles/
if you could ya would pop ya cherries wit a pop-cicle/
dat obsitakle apperantly you can't climb/
only time you do extreme merkin' iz on yo cpu scene watch 2 dudes go to work on eachothers behind/
you behind,cheer up dats yo favorite postion/
as you see smackdowns im dishin/

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

.Merkage. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 07:24 PM.

Black not wanted in The military but in wackness he's consider elite
cuz he culd'nt "shock his audience".....If he had "jumper cables" on da seats
I won't mirror ya but rhymes hurt ya Black and destroy your interior
Cuz you "don't want beef"... like "vegeterians" in "cafeteariors"
Frostbite? put ice in and ya mouth and kiss my verse and ya name is right
With "both eyes open" he's still not considered solid with the sight(site)
"sweet home" but Rapverse anit tha place you need to "consider moving"
STL herd you was repping them and juss told you to to "S"top "T"ha "L"osing

quickie

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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"

uping for 4th win..................................

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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"

Voted For: .Merkage.

VOTE IN LINK BELOW(NO EXPLAMATION NEEDED EITHER)
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202755

Flow-Black frost...wat kinda struture is that?can't have one line with 5 words then one with 20 right after unless ya got multis which you didn't.Merkage had flow

Punches-MErkage had played attempts at wordplay.Like beef/vegetarians,shock audience/shit in seats,sight/site,stl shit.All of them are played.But then....black frost didn't have any punches.

Personals-Only one I recall is probably the STL one which is uncreative and not hard-hittin.

Multis-Merkage....the 3rd bar.

Originality-Like I said...Merkage had some really played lines...but Black had no punches.

Vote-Merkage(vote in link above)

up.............................. .................................................

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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"

^^^can ya return the favor please?................

uuuuuppppiiiinnn
for votes
so get to votin
yall!!!

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

Voted For: .Merkage.

blackfrostbite . . . i was expecting better . . . and i'm not trying to hate or anything . . . i think .Merkage. had a better drop, but some advise merkage: Cuz you "don't want beef"... like "vegeterians" in "cafeteariors": that line is played . . . be more creative . . . closer was ok . . . :"sweet home" but Rapverse anit tha place you need to "consider moving"
STL herd you was repping them and juss told you to to "S"top "T"ha "L"osing: didn't really jump out at me but solid closer. . overall you drop a better verse . . you get my vote . . keep writing and good luck to both

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

up............................................. my verse was weak but meh

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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"

*sigh*.....i'm get my vote removed for merkage not returning the favor..

feel free homie do wat you please..........
............................you cool

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

Voted For: .Merkage.


blackfrostbite

check it,picture dis scenario/
you bout as straight as MJ wit a pink scarf,cut-off blue jeans,wit some pink boots on,enlisted in da gay rodeo/
^flow is way off, last line stretched like whoa! Could've been a decent punch

you da type to be a scientist so you expirenment by suckin all da dill pickles/
if you could ya would pop ya cherries wit a pop-cicle/
^aight decent bar

dat obsitakle apperantly you can't climb/
only time you do extreme merkin' iz on yo cpu scene watch 2 dudes go to work on eachothers behind/
^nice punch but last line stretched like whoa again, flow off

you behind,cheer up dats yo favorite postion/
as you see smackdowns im dishin/
^aight closer

.Merkage.

Black not wanted in The military but in wackness he's consider elite
cuz he culd'nt "shock his audience".....If he had "jumper cables" on da seats
^haha nice closer ya kno

I won't mirror ya but rhymes hurt ya Black and destroy your interior
Cuz you "don't want beef"... like "vegeterians" in "cafeteariors"
^good wordplay in last line, bit played maybe

Frostbite? put ice in and ya mouth and kiss my verse and ya name is right
With "both eyes open" he's still not considered solid with the sight(site)
^lovin last line with the wordplay, first is coo too

"sweet home" but Rapverse anit tha place you need to "consider moving"
STL herd you was repping them and juss told you to to "S"top "T"ha "L"osing
^nice playin off his location

Vote for Merkage for the better and more creative punches, better flow and vocab as well.

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