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07-31-05, 08:33 PM
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A dream of dreams (Poem)
IP: 772D 181D
I dream a dream of dreams,
Everynight I gain sight; Images of imagination I see, Some to terrible to fright; Creatures move about, Wit' colors so perverse; Even tha darkest ones no doubt, Look to grand to be obserd; I wake as if I just was born, A sweat so cold wit' a feelin' of scorn; I fear my demise is comin', By tha Grim Reapers sword; And when asked how I'll defeat this opponent, I can not come wit' an answer; 'Cuz tha next time I dream, I'll be staring in tha eyes of my master. http://community.rapverse.com/newth...o=newthread&f=5 |
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08-01-05, 12:58 AM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: D8B2 7902
liked this, but it should go in poetic scriptures, topic was good, vocab was ok, keep it up man
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08-01-05, 01:58 AM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Closed that aint no link to no feedback..its to make a new reply
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