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Pen N' Paper | 5 | 83.33% | |
.Murdz. | 1 | 16.67% | |
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07-05-05, 09:13 PM | #1 | |
Ka.Nek.ShuN
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.Murdz. vs Pen N' Paper
IP: 7F23 8EDF
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20 - 40 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ~Topic : Life In The Ghetto~ Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 07-08-05 at 09:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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07-05-05, 10:14 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 10:14 PM.
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07-07-05, 09:40 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-07-05 09:40 AM.
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07-07-05, 09:04 PM | #4 | |
Ka.Nek.ShuN
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IP: 7F23 8EDF
3rd person Walk through the projects-in-his-mind, allow his prospects-to-unwind, He lives like suspects-on-the-grind, laying his concepts-on-his-nine Always confuse-friends-for-foes, thinking their the same-or-equal, Forced to abuse-his-trends-for-dough, patrons tell him flame-the-people After savage assaults, he has no choice but to rest-in-the-mud, His conscience poisons his heart, like the disease digesting-his-blood To stimulate-his-aggression he infiltrates-his-depression, Through the tunnels of injustice he navigates-his-profession Can’t detect-his-fear, always expect-hes-near n protect-ya-gear, With stolen denim and mama's money he still rejects-a-tear See the criminal-distortion in a minimal-proportion, One man that’s able to hold the subliminal-extortion Picture a face-of-anxiety, Life has no space-for-variety, This hoodrat searches many homes for a place-in-society Suffered through the pen, left with his soul brutally swollen, His methods do not fit life, like the clothes that he has stolen Immune to the cold, No comfort as every days a new estate, Scrambles, his life in shambles without food on a dinner plate 1st person Knocking out innocent people all-manners-wrapped-and-misplaced Mentality erupted with small-hammers-strapped-to-my-waist Rocking a chain-which-isn't-mine, waiting for my brain-to-get-inline, The devils got my soul, the lord put a stain-on-my-design I'm constructed-out-of-sin, feels like I’m corrupted-by-my-kin, Genetic traits from my father must have erupted-from-within My ghat staggers-to-attack, Wonder how long the crimes-take, Feels like daggers-in-my-back, Inserted for the dimes-sake Since the day I was born, 20 years of tryin to keep warm, There clothes feel like my organs, cause both of them feel torn My words are harsh, my plots are deadly, but my ghats speaking louder, With a 'crib' I don’t see 'bread', and cover myself in 'powder' With worthless morals and ethics my mind lets me Endeavour, America and the world should realize, crime rate last forever
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07-08-05, 07:53 AM | #5 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
I’m living in the ghetto the worst place to live in nothing here will be seen Straight cold blooded killers looking mean taking everyone’s dreams and green They keep they weapons in they socks, pocket and pants and the knives folded The bandanas to make you feel their gangster side gangs in their loyalty molded And after another, this falls to another the concrete, the sidewalk whispers the phrase Base heads stay in a daze, as we here we get treated like criminals or more like slaves The upcoming in the ghetto is what we want is a fact, to reach out to the racists in blacks Hood and ghetto life for all in tact, who know how to react, and keep the money stacked All these gangsters acting all hard and shit to feel like they gangs need to be respected This is just the beginning really… we cant see the future but we know what’s expected The devil in drugs got a lot of people here dead but that’s how it came to be banished We got to eat our sandwiches before we die of hunger and there’s nothing left and vanish Sons dieing in the streets that’s how the ghetto is once the sounds of their mother Falls out when they son died... and now there’s only one of the 5 sisters and brothers As we look up to the skies and we feel the weather it isn’t snowing but the ghetto is white Is it an illusion?... man we got to get it together, just to feel good so we can sleep tonight They stay gripped wit they 44’s and the bullets deep impacted u can feel it’s hollowed Starving here there’s no money they cant swallow so the drugs is where they followed So everyday passes in the life of the ghetto tring to get out so as we look above to stars We see gloves in cars, as soon as the moon falls like a cereal spoon it’ll be red like mars
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-08-05, 09:48 AM | #6 | |
Champion
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This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
IP: 56F8 8092
polllzz...........................................
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07-08-05, 11:30 AM | #7 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
...........up..................................... ..................
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-08-05, 03:35 PM | #8 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin dammit vtes plz.............................
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-08-05, 10:00 PM | #9 | |
Ka.Nek.ShuN
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uppin dizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzz
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07-09-05, 03:38 PM | #10 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this........upp.........upp...................
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-10-05, 04:10 PM | #11 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this..........for votes cmon
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-10-05, 08:39 PM | #12 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this........for votes cmon
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-11-05, 08:42 AM | #13 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
up.........uppin.......up........uppin............
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-11-05, 02:01 PM | #14 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
uppin this cmon close this down...................
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
07-12-05, 09:02 AM | #15 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
...........................up..................... ............
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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