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Old 08-09-05, 01:30 PM   #1
Illist
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Check, Check..

Always Been Ill, Penicilin Couldn't Even Stop That..
Begginers Are Like Bad Trains, Coz Nyce Will Snap Tracks..
Come And Test Me, You'll End Up Worse Than Were Ye First Began..
Dare To Challenge, N You'll loose More Than Hope...Like A Red Sox Fan..
Everyone's Quick To Hate, But My Lyrics Known For Havin The Best Reps..
Fuck These Toddlers, Tryna Jump to Me..Before Learnin Deir First Steps..
Got The Illest Lyrics, If I Die..They Gonna Resurrect In Another Spirit..
Hate it or love it...
I'm Not Braggin, But I'm Always Hitt'n 69, Like Exceedin Speed Limits..
Jaws Droppin..When My Verses Heard..Proves How Amazing I Am..
K's Ain't Seen In This Slugger, Coz I'll Hang Niggas Up, Like Ku Klux Klan..
Loosin' Ain't A Part Of Me, I'll Put It On The Side, Like A Bad Sport..
My Drops Are So Sick.Everytime I Do A Verse, It's Like am On Life Support
N If You Don't Think I'm Ill ,Then Name Ya'self After A Month, Coz July (you lie)..
On Target All Times, So Like A Dalmatian..You'll Get Hit On Da Spot When I Drive By..
Please Ho's..Challengin Me You'll End Up Dipped In Red Like Jalapeno Doritos..
Questions like "Is He A Pimp"..Quasimodo Couldn't Bend Backs Like I Do To Dees Ho's..
Rare, I'm A One Of A Kind M.C., Coz I Come Wit Karrats And Cheese Like A Grocery..
Smokin' No Seeds, Coz You'd Think I Support Forest Fires The Way I Burn The Trees..
The Top Of The Chain, Have Niggas Open Fire, Just To See A Spark Of My Flames..
Ultimate M.C., Coz Its Like Puttn Challengers In Da P.C. The Way They Feelin' Max. Payne
Victory Is Always In Sight, And Ye Know I Don't Write Lefty Coz I'm Always Gettn It Right.
When Ho's Come To Rip Please(ripleys Dey Believe Im A Hurricane Da Way I Break Dykes
Xtra Ill, Dats Wat I'm Puttin' Down.And It's Like Ya'll Farmers The Way You Feel This Shyt..
Ya'll Runnin' Low, Coz The Only Time You Doublin (dublin) Is In The English Premiership
Zero Or None, Thats Your Odds Of Winnin' Wich One You Takin'..?
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Old 08-09-05, 01:56 PM   #2
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haha nice concept like how u did the abc's lol......up on ur sctructure i really couldnt get a good flow goin homey...ur vocab was extrememly basic, only big word wwas like dalmation......up on multis so it will flow better.....try and get all the words to end at the same spot at the end of each line.....and as u go along in ur rhyme try and enhance the vocab so its more enjoyable to read......keep uppin keep postin and doin ur thing....RTF on my sig links......peace
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Old 08-09-05, 07:08 PM   #3
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Closed no link..pm me a link if you wish to have this re-opened
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