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Old 08-10-05, 04:27 PM   #1
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Wish Me Good Luck(PLEASE PEEP!!!)Ill Return The Favors!!!

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Old 08-10-05, 07:59 PM   #2
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I dont like the chorus... the beat is ok... you really dont look like an emcee... but you dont sound bad... ya flow needs work but youll definitely get batter. You need better produktion. I think that ruins the whole track... spend a little more time with the effex on your mixer... Its all good though... keep bringin the heat dawg
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Old 08-10-05, 10:11 PM   #3
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sall good man thanks alot
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Old 08-11-05, 01:10 AM   #4
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WHOA! Thats you!?

No offense but you don't look like the rapper type...

Beat is pretty good...it's suiting...

Chorus is a'ight...quality sounds bad, but I am listening on lo-fi...first thing I notice is that your flow needs work. Sometimes your on beat, but most of the time your not. Voice is decent...delivery was a'ight but you need to sound a little more confident. Overall, keep elevatin'...it'll come.
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Old 08-11-05, 12:20 PM   #5
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I'd rip this beat to fuckin piece

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uh huh


likin it

can I get this beat homie please


flow pretty decent

a couple CLIPS...


I liked this


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Old 08-11-05, 03:21 PM   #6
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beat is pretty ill....i listened to it earlier........

you have gotten WAAAAYYYYY better since the last time i listened to you...i was pretty suprised......the hook is ok...it could be better....but not bad.....your flow is decent...you can still work on it a lil...but its mos def an improvement.....voice is ok......

overall this was a pretty decent track......keep it up
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