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Depending On Me
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Ma friend wrote this when she hadda fight wit her man what yall think about it?
Depending On Me im taking my heart and locking it away. not just inside me, but in a steal box. after that im hiding it, in the deepest, darkest part of the ocean. never again will i let some1 in. no1 will kno where it is. ive been hurt 2 many times and still it continues. i cant take the pain, the suffering. it all hurts 2 bad, its not worth it. love is nothing but a bullshit word. its just something that makes you feel happy, an illusion. it fills what feel like an empty space inside. the only thing that can fill that space is u. the only 1 who can be depended on is u. the only 1 who will be there in the end is u. from now on, ill depend on me.
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Pretty decent poem, strong words to someone, maybe its just the way you wrote it,but the structure is all jumbled, but it was good for what it was, i've read too many love poems,but this was aiight. stay up.1
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