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IP: 0DB3 4A20
Hate flying everywhere these days, its atrocious.
No peace anywhere everyone saying these days are fercious. So what is a person to do? Sit back and watch these days become doom? Lay back and watch the cinematic effects unfold, only to realize that this is the truth we see and behold. The days we seeing of wars and weather, everything getting worse nothing better. Kids looking twice their age, no morals cuz of no God. No one has a true concience anymore to see that there is guidelines in a book. Back in the day, things were the same, everyone sinning heavily with no shame, God put them down, with a puff of smoke, fire breathin down makin them scream and choke. Soddom and Gommorah, is just like us, molestation, reputations, and homosexuals abound, but no true love, no true feelings just horrible sin went around and around. God said he gonna judge us, same way he did them, with fire and brimstone but more because our sin. Time is short, the world's getting sicker, dying by the minute, as people gettin iller. Day comin and when it is passed, I feel sorry for ya'll cuz ya will not last.
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this was good, liked this one, emotion was pretty good, imagery was ok but hardly noticable, topic was good as always thats one thing you always got is a nice topic, flow was good on this, keep it up girl
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
not feelin this man no hate...had terrible structure....cant even describe it lol........thats where my feedback ends....cant take this anymore
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
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