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Old 08-12-05, 02:15 PM   #1
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24 hours left to live

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even though some people hated on this cypher, i thought it was a cool idea.
i wrote about what i would do with a day left to live. hate it or love it leave feedback:

if i had but 24 hours left to see
i'd make sure all of my enemies lie next to me
think of the right words to say when i see my mother
i'd kiss my girl on the cheek, let her know that i love her
give her a couple hours, i would be her perfect lover
give all my money and rhyme books to my sisters and my brothers
contemplate the deeds of my life as i take my last gasp
and watch the clock, waitin' for my last hour to pass
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Old 08-12-05, 02:29 PM   #2
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If the Rock Had 24 Hours to Live
He Would Kill Everyone Even His Kids
Throw Fits, For Giggles and Shits
Closed Fists Hits, Theres No Time to Fogive
Cause if I got 24 Hours then you Got 2 to Live
With so little Time, and so Much to Say How can i Display
Me the Rock and stone Cold, Would COme out of the CLoset TOday


24 hours left to Live, should Be the Mentaity of everyday
Tommorow, You Either Survive or Die. Or Fade away
Its Up to You not to Decay into the Struggles of Today.
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Old 08-12-05, 05:51 PM   #3
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good lookin' on the post Rock, i liked it. wonder if the other wrestlers can write like that.
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