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InfiniteStan |
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2 | 28.57% |
Mike McGuire |
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5 | 71.43% |
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Mike McGuire vs InfiniteStan
IP: CE55 173A
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6 - 12 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-31-05 at 11:34 PM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
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IP: 0825 899A
InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 11:45 PM.
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IP: 0825 899A
listen.
your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use to bounce of the walls when im coming after you you should of saved your credits on rapverse now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse im leaving and closing this case once and for all leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball ........InfiniteStan |
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IP: CE55 173A
Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-05 02:57 PM.
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IP: CE55 173A
I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest''
Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon'' You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline Line #2 - Wrong man, Mike McGuire....Ron Artest attacked the wrong fan during the brawl.
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IP: CE55 173A
Ok we both dropped.....Honest votes....and good luck stan....and me
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
coo coo....good luck to you too...
.. ..UPPIN VOTES....... ... INFINITESTAN V.s MIKE MCGUIRE` |
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IP: 0825 899A
c/mon ppl .....vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!
... ... STAN Vs. MC'GUIRE |
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£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
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IP: ED8B 0748
Voted For: Mike McGuire
InfiniteStan-Your structure wasn't all that great...no hard punches, no multis, and no wordplay a pretty shitty drop...ya need to elevate some man Mike McGuire-Structure wasn't that great either, but you came a lot harder...no multis...some decent wordplay i liked that cardiac arrest line V-Mike McGuire for comin harder with the punches n wordplay
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Mike McGuire
MIKE MCGUIRE I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest'' Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest ^good wordplay as well as diss 6/10^ Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon'' ^again nicely planted diss..5/10^ You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis ^kinda gross self glor. but i liked it 8/10^ I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline ^good ending and personal proof down below 8/10^ OVERAL:your verse was plain with hott original and fresh punches nothing was played you had good wordplay only flaw was structure, but u still had good flow. INFINITESTAN your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better ^terrible self glor. wasnt funny nor diss 0/10^ runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill ^weak punchline...bad flow 4/10^ closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee ^mom jokes are played gutta be creative 0/10^ you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use to bounce of the walls when im coming after you ^no..........................bad 0/10^ you should of saved your credits on rapverse now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse ^hes a guy i doubt he has a purse, weak punch 0/10^ im leaving and closing this case once and for all leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball ^weak closer but actually dissed weakly prob. best line 3/10^ OVERALL:your lines was whack and weak..no hate man but you got a lot of elevation to do...try making your verse about dissing your opponent not self glor. second be more creative wit ur wordplay and ur disses dont just throw out played punches and expect to win v/Mike Mcguire Please rtf since i kindly analyzed your battle its in the sig or front lines pz. 1
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The Saviour
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IP: 8145 E511
Voted For: InfiniteStan
InfiniteStan: Your structure was good but that was about all that was, flow was ok as well I guess. First bar was weak, worded poorly and poor concept, second bar same again, third same again but this was very played, mum jokes are really played out, fourth bar weak, fifth bar was probably your best but still real weak, and sixth bar really weak. Basically, you're just saying how you're gonna hurt him which isn't good, you need to think up creative concepts and word them so they hit, where as all your doing is just typing out stuff without any real meaning. So yeah overall, a weak typical newb verse basically. v/ Mike McGuire Would you both drop a vote on my battle please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973 |
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The Saviour
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IP: 8145 E511
Ah shit, I cut off the first part of my breakdown by accident.
Mike McGuire: Had some nice wordplay, structure was a bit stretched, flow was ok. First bar was pretty decent, I only got it after the explanation though, second bar not bad but really played, third bar was a bit weak, and fourth bar was the best of the battle, I liked it. |
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The Saviour
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IP: 8145 E511
Ah shit, I voted for the wrong person as well. Remove my vote please.
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IP: CE55 173A
So it should be 3-0 me now since that mess up vote thing.
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IP: CE55 173A
uppin.............................................
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