http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204078
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204052




Song's called fanbase.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=388046

this beat is sickening but I'm a disreguard the fact I heard this beat a million times.....ok ya quality is better but still terrible.....u need a new mic badly....your flow is decent....but its real basic....u focusing on hitting the snares instead of flowing like water over the beat....it hit snare but lacked any real rhythm.....your delivery sounds forced....I can tell u jus experimenting wit putting emotions in your verse cuz your emotion wasn't goign wit ya lyrics....it was either montone or you'd over do it....an raise ya voice or lower in a place where it wasn't warranted........but lyrically i like where u was coming from...but your lyrics were basic as well but they had a good message...jus keep elevating son...u def coming along

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Thank you sir You still not a good influence though.

lol true for the beat but its still fucking sickness, i cant get tired of this, flow is dope, emotions is dope, quality is eee, lyrics arre pretty dope man, get a better mic and ull be an audio vet imtelling you

dope shit man, u sound JUST like Nick Cannon

nice flow, i like the lyrics too

beat is aight, but a lil bit sickening like Triple said

overall, nice drop.

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ROFLLMFAO!#$%@LMFAOROFL @ me soundin like nick cannon.

*stabs throat*

so i love the beat..it kinda sounds like the mic is too close to your mouth maybe..and if u have cool edit read the tutorials on quality..its actuallly really easy..your flow i thought was cool..and the lyrics were also good..but other than that jus work on your quality..

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Listening as I type.....liking the intro, Im not lovin the beat as much you cant really hear it ....quality aint that good....flow and lyrics were actually rlly good...so man...what u gotta do IMO is jus sort out quality n thats it man...this song is sick pretty much... 9/10...

RTF on my Song ... Forgive Me

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204233

Thanks

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www.soundclick.com/dollaback

lmao, don't ever use a beat wit vocals in it cuz it's embarassing for you dog.

shit was ill though.

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Every beat I find got samples in it. EVERYBODY samplin now. I just got through hearin this beat with a fuckin chipmunk sample.

^ I'm not talking bout sampling like this, but the vocal embarrases you cuz ya quality to so but...lol.

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