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Old 10-16-05, 09:08 AM   #1
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Fame Existance-UNF & Canox

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Yo Ppl Can U Check It Its me N Canox

www.soundclick.com/unf its called Fame Existance its ma best an i need to know wot yall think!


Left feed:Speats N Intermental Hocus Pocus 2
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Old 10-16-05, 09:31 AM   #2
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Itros coo.

beats decent,

flows on lyrcs are aight,
first guy was ight...

sounds a bit dull though,

unf kickin in:

more emotion, lives the terack up flows safe, couplea bars aint rhyme but still pretty decent.

Not a bad track.

Please rtf on my 1st audio.
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Old 10-16-05, 09:39 AM   #3
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Aight Thx For The Feed man
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Old 10-16-05, 09:59 AM   #4
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Canox my boi doin it well...liked the first verse..def flow well on a slow verse...precence decent, delivery ok, emotion need uppin, dont like how u come in UNF but I like the rest, flow was steady...precence youre best...7/10

rtf on my new track "hey mama"
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Old 10-16-05, 10:04 AM   #5
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Yeh, you better than the first dude because he got a more monotone voice in this verse. The beat is nice btw, hook is cool, good add-on.

You definitely improved, you flowed good on the beat and you managed to put nice emotion in it. Delivery improved compared to previous tracks so just keep on working at it. Lyrics were on point as well.

Keep it up man...
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Old 10-16-05, 10:06 AM   #6
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thx ma uppin.........
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Old 10-16-05, 10:56 AM   #7
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werd, this was a dope track....canox u opened it good....liked how u kept with the flow, i feel you had a lil trouble at one point...but still pulled it off and overall had a solid verse

the hook was pretty dope, i liked it....had good ring to it lol

unf man u had some good vocab and what not...u had good flow to it..pretty much same quality of verse as canox....this was a hot track guys

overall track: 7/10

rtf on anything
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Old 10-16-05, 11:02 AM   #8
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thx for the feed yo uppin....
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Old 10-16-05, 12:42 PM   #9
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first dudes iight...good intro and whatnot..

hook iight..i wasent feelin it but w.e

UNF....came i think way better than the first dude..had more emotion and i feel put more into it.....

8/10
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Old 10-16-05, 01:03 PM   #10
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yo thx for the feed....l.
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