Last Breath

Quietly, a comment released and tension is eased,
The final push, as the doctor’s yell, “squeeze!”
She can’t believe, her daughter and heart, finally delivered,
She pulls her close as the baby quivers,
The slight moan escaped the child’s mouth,
Her vision was fogged and covered… clouded,
But she doubted her daughter would be born with flaws,
So she screamed in pain, clawed in awe,
As the doctors pried the discolored figure from her,
Sobs of pain left her lips as the child was transferred,
She panted and screamed as the time seemed,
To pass tardily, along with her self-esteem,
Later she was told and she protested with a bold…
Mask covering her pain struck face that holds,
The key to her life’s success, this was her baby!
She had her whole life ahead; maybe enlist in the navy,
You could never pay me, enough to face her now,
As she moved in an out, with a an evasive frown,
And wow, she would plow through the crowds, adoption.
She wanted her own child, but she had limited options,
A single wife, forget the husband in life,
But she struggled about her age, even though despite…
The pain she endured, the mundane days assured,
That a broken brain and heart… can never be cured.
She would lie in bed, or curl in the corner,
Passing by the hours, as the cried and mourned her,
She recalled the day sadly, withdrew sounds of pain,
People thought she was crazy, but to this day she claims:
The child’s smirk mistaken for a smile at death,
As the baby leaned on her mother, passing her last breath.

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Yuppp.

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this was a nice story and it flowed and rhymed but not with a rap flow doe just a poetic flow

I’m more proper than the ore of copper I come from
the ground and throw scum around to the dumb
I’m a sacred bull and like matrix I pull out computer
Viruses, my script come off the tip of my tongue no tutor
Needed,

wow.... this is more poetry...

I normaly don't stop to read open mics but this wass hella good...
keep up

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