Ayo all....


I need to know what the basic things are you look for when voting/or reading topicals.....

I got a battle wit Mizz fyre, So i wont be takin advice from her, Just incase she gives me the wrong tips for a cheap win

Jokes Mami

But for really, Tell me da basics





































(I must sound like a damn herb right now lol)

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lol.....i would say i look for creativeness, complexity, the ability to use a complex rhyme scheme, emotion, flow........

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I like confused structure. Its very original to me. Yo have on and off flow sorta gives it a poetic feel and makes it look like you're just speaking your mind. Imagary doesn't really serve as something important with me. Deliver it upfront and I'm happy.

(tryingtomakemissfyrewin)

Vocab,...Flow,.... Complexity,..... Creativity,.... Structure,....
Emotions,....

Thats not in an order by the way but all needed in a dope topical verse.

LOL @ Trying to make mizz fyre win

Ok thanks for the input.....

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DAMN
Critic.........where in the hell have you been man?!

Thanks for the tips and welcome back My nigga

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Btw Meta the html links are diff So I think you gotta use [] [/] instead of <> </> in your marquee.

I know fams went away for a bit but I'm back now, need any help with
your topicals holla at me,...

Stay up homie

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ayo crit sup....our battle still only got one vote lol

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I know should I just get Strobe to close it ? what u think.

^^^yeh ain't no point in keeping it open....even tho its gonna be my loss lol

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Nah I will tell him not to if he can do that, got to go stay up fams

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^^^aight crit......peace

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Dope siggy Fyre...^