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Old 08-28-05, 01:41 PM   #1
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...15%... (The Movement Diss)

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haha fuckers... Welcome to the Mind of McCalli...
15%... The new shit... I ain't even tryin' yet...
This is just a warning shot... AND I DON'T GIVE A FUCK ABOUT U BITCHES...
Butchu can get it... Take A Walk With Me...

I'm abusive... Get used to it... I'm boostin' my crew kid while the Movement Ain't Movin'...
Pickin' & Choosin' these bitches and fusin' their craniums with uranium shells... TT-INC UNIT...
Your the only army marchin' in place... Fokuss I'll erase ya face and send ya crew into Anarchy...
Stay 'Fokuss'ed or hocus pocus I'm smokin' ya ahses like Zig Zag ya bitch Fag... I'm the King of RV...
What's your Advantage? NOTHIN'. Ya Humpin' and Suckin' mad dicks, ya need black magic to Average--kid ya wack....
Me... I'm the present, the past, the future... resident asshole... kill you? Sure... Bitch Iiiiii'm Baack...
Ya fucked up... You shoulda shut up or sucked up... Diss the kid Mc? Ya Finished like Hussien...
Witness me rip this kid's hopes & dreams... hopes of green... now note the beam... BAP! Now Who's Game?
I'm nearly signed... but I'm still committin' chryme still writin' my lines at the Sleep Inn...
A Ruff Tuff Thug... I'll creep in ya home... Fire the slug from a piece in ya dome... your life will Sleep In...
It's mathematics... Trigga Town plus VP GD Anxiety IE & TG Equals Dynasty... Now it's Title Town...
You can't fight it now... blindly swingin' ya get 'NOK'd out... Kid do ya need me to write it down?
The incorporated town of townsmen pull the triggas it's named after to straight silence clowns...
I'll smoke ya... The Movement... HA man y'all posers straight jokas Y'all Girls is a circus... Like it now?
Hmmm... I like the sound... I'll douse y'all in kerosene... The end of you when I light it up...
Strike it up... Ouch... TTI Burns Hurt... Tryin' to be the first ya get hit wit spurts... Line 'em Up...

AND THERE YOU HAVE IT
I'm just toyin' with you kids right now...
Butchu and you and you can get it....
So... If you think of comin' at us again...
It's Curtains....
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 08-28-05, 02:02 PM   #2
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 08-28-05, 03:36 PM   #3
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better than Stanza's diss...




good job...structre was off a lil but hey you had some good lines in there......better than mine in a way ...good job



what u tryna make me mad




naw im too happy for that shit.....give yo boy stanza some pointers
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Old 08-28-05, 04:00 PM   #4
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Thats what Im talkin bout!

Nice!

and fokus, ur real with ur shit...That say's alot!

Fam killin yall slowly!

I like tha verse an ur multi's are off tha WAM!
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Old 08-28-05, 04:40 PM   #5
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much better than stanza's diss.....
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Old 08-28-05, 05:08 PM   #6
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yeah celebrate Trigga Town.....


jump for joy
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Old 08-28-05, 05:13 PM   #7
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Pinkslip battle then we really can after yall gone.....
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Old 08-28-05, 05:18 PM   #8
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Tony the day you text battle me..is the day we'll pinkslip battle ya'll
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Old 08-28-05, 05:44 PM   #9
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Bitch I'm talkin bout Crew pinkslip battle
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Old 08-28-05, 05:50 PM   #10
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i kno................................this is strait outta the g-unit beef.....

hot artist joins crew...........crew leader left hand talks stuff...new artist leaves..new artist clowns crew leader it's funny anit it Green
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Old 08-28-05, 08:12 PM   #11
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seriously...man..this diss was boring...I've been watching the diss tracks in this beef..and Fokuss has the only good diss.

Fix ur structure up and simply..get more raw disses and shit.
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Old 08-28-05, 10:09 PM   #12
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give stanza pointers as said before.....but ya diss was iight
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Old 08-29-05, 12:14 AM   #13
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it was boring but i gotta say in all honestly it was alot betta den stanza's weak azz diss u should give him sum pointers but as long as u don't include my name it'z all hood ova here wit me...i'm ready 4 whateva
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Old 08-29-05, 01:36 AM   #14
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thsi was nice..still...its was nt the best
and not the worst...
up the structure
lines are too long..
but other than that its good...stay up
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Old 08-29-05, 01:51 AM   #15
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lmao at shit talking before your verse...

...in text
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