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-FokusS- | 0 | 0% | |
Stanza | 5 | 100.00% | |
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08-27-05, 06:05 PM | #1 | |
Banned: Biting
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-FokusS- vs Stanza
IP: 0825 899A
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 Ko 4-1 ko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-28-05 at 06:05 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
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08-27-05, 06:33 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 06:33 PM.
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08-27-05, 06:33 PM | #3 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
Yo
Im Merking This Guy So Bad It Makes Him Want To Pledge The Truth This dude Aint Threw A Punch Since Christopher Reeves Legs Moved I Told Fokus To Step up In This Battle and He Shows Up In High Heels You Couldnt Have A Ford Fokus Even If You Beat You Meat On Wheels I Was Born to Bash Bitchez With Venomous Verbals Like Lyrical Vikingz Throwin Terrible Trauma, Plus I Crush What These Tyrants are Typing -Finshed- If You DonT get It Then Dont Vote Because Im Not Forcing My Lines so You Can Get The Punchez |
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08-27-05, 07:49 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 85D5 61EF
-FokusS- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 07:49 PM.
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08-27-05, 08:33 PM | #5 | |
got u all confused n shit
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IP: 85D5 61EF
Without clubs Stanza was FOUR being an average star when he keyed sub par
"Key" weak so how far can you muscle a board when u can't space out ya bars U not reel Can't argue that he feeds off wackness so theres no way 2 de-bait Cuz Stanza betta sit-com or benchpress this beef.......maybe you'd be uppin the steaks I'll "Busta" "Rhyme" n have u "flip" to bi*ch "mode" cuz my crew's "imperial then whoop ya "wigga" ass n make u sing a "negro spiritual"
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08-27-05, 08:35 PM | #6 | |
got u all confused n shit
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IP: 85D5 61EF
uping lets get this overwith.......................................... .....
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08-27-05, 09:00 PM | #7 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Uppin ...................Your gonna lose man Your weak
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08-28-05, 12:12 AM | #8 | |
A Life Of Chryme
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This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
IP: 0825 899A
checkin polllz fam.................................
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08-28-05, 12:18 AM | #9 | |
RV aint Dead
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This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
IP: 314D 5503
check check dem dem polls polls
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08-28-05, 12:35 AM | #10 |
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IP: C777 4494
Voted For: Stanza
Im Merking This Guy So Bad It Makes Him Want To Pledge The Truth This dude Aint Threw A Punch Since Christopher Reeves Legs Moved 4.......Reeves shit is played now I Told Fokus To Step up In This Battle and He Shows Up In High Heels You Couldnt Have A Ford Fokus Even If You Beat You Meat On Wheels 6....good..but didn't like the set-up as it was stupuid I Was Born to Bash Bitchez With Venomous Verbals Like Lyrical Vikingz Throwin Terrible Trauma, Plus I Crush What These Tyrants are Typing 2....worst bar...i don't know if you tryna use the big words to hide the fact that you saying nothing..but it didn't work Well..has a played bar like the reeves one.Anything involving reeves is played.The 2nd bar was ite..except that set-up was gay.The 3rd bar had an awful flow..and it was shit. Without clubs Stanza was FOUR being an average star when he keyed sub par "Key" weak so how far can you muscle a board when u can't space out ya bars 3...a lot of filler in here..and punch was worded bad.. U not reel Can't argue that he feeds off wackness so theres no way 2 de-bait Cuz Stanza betta sit-com or benchpress this beef.......maybe you'd be uppin the steaks 4...still got a lot of filler & wording your punches bad. I'll "Busta" "Rhyme" n have u "flip" to bi*ch "mode" cuz my crew's "imperial then whoop ya "wigga" ass n make u sing a "negro spiritual" 2....OMG.....worst bar Ok..you got far too many fillers in there.Word compress your lines next time.Get rid of unneccesary shit and leave the core of the punch only.Had some attempts at wordplay,like the de-bait one,but it was executed bad.And that 3rd bar was just awful.ALso...don't use so many qoutations. WEAK BATTLE Vote-Stanza |
08-29-05, 09:21 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
LOl Shut Yo Wack Ass Up Deranged lol Your Fuckn Yoself With them Vibrator Rymes
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08-29-05, 11:09 PM | #12 | |
Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza- Your verse was nice n all pretty short n simple...Punches were aight i mean good enough to win this battle because they were a little bit better and connected well...structure aight n all...had an aight flow too overall-6.5/10... FokusS- your verse was aight too...punches was blah some were weak...structure could be fixed up a little bit...keep workin n all...flow was aight too...but overall- 5.5/10 decent battle here...
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08-29-05, 11:37 PM | #13 | |
£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
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IP: DB75 D896
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza-I liked that Christopher Reeves line pretty funny lol anyway you had a pretty nice drop...constant structure and nice word choice FokusS-structure came off at the end....your punches were kinda weak too i didnt really like your drop all that well but it wasnt that bad V/Stanza
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08-29-05, 11:48 PM | #14 | |
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IP: D1F4 0145
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LMAO!!! Vibrator Rhymes!! son...if you want a battle...holla at me through PM!! |
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08-30-05, 05:01 PM | #15 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Damn Thats 3-0 ko
That damn quick LOL Damn I wasnt even Thinkin It Was gonna Go That Fast lol Ill Get this closed Peace and oh yeah fokus remeber who merked you when you runnin yo mouth off @ trigga town |
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