Hurricaine Katrina

Worry came about hurricane Katrina she ripped homes
And flipped unknown buildings, killing folks with strong
Wind and rain thunder loud as funnel clouds twirled
Like spinning tops to a never ending stop the world
Was amazed at the damage it destroyed lyrical cultures
And physical structures it closed roads blew down sculptures
The mess was too extreme for the rescue team it seem hazy
As disaster gravy dripped president sought after navy ships like crazy
He sent crews and large teams to New Orleans to aid in rescue missions
People trapped on roof tops the truth drops to helicopter pilots collisions
With water s of fright just to alter the height of survival no violet mission
The sewage vapors grips like paper clips to nose as the flood waters rose
It was a wet bazaar even BRET FAVRE of the Green Bay Packers close
Hope on finding many alive

good verse man, i felt the imagery and emotion....ur multis was fresh..but ur structure was honestly off i felt if i was able to get a flwo....i would give this an 8/10 but its really 7/10.....i dont have any o/ms so can u please drop an honest vote on my new battles thanks man and good job urve really elevated

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

This was the first good thing ive seen from you....gd work

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