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Old 08-29-05, 10:26 AM   #1
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Poetry & Politics

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They told me that poetry and politics dont mix
but im the type to take a circle 2 a square n make sure it fits.
figure heads, spin doctors, the media and society
Turned my intoxication for reality into sobriety.
Politicians push n freedom of speech is diminished
'Political correctness' means poetry is finished.
How can we express what we witness!?
if what we see is 'wrong', I'm not impressed.
So i'm making this statement, Don't edit ur views
Don't believe what u see or hear on the news
Political agendas, governmental wishes and scams.
Have the art of writing suppressed to please "The Man."
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Old 08-30-05, 01:01 AM   #2
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not sure about the man........ *smiles* very nice piece! nice structure and flow, but i'm not sure witness and impressed rhymes........... i liked your style and ability to use your vocabulary fluently in your piece, we should collab sometime. overall 9/10 keep em comin.
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Old 08-30-05, 01:27 PM   #3
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lol thank u, it was jus sumthin i keyed in a few minutes after watchin the news lol
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Old 09-01-05, 11:40 PM   #4
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nice drop, very creative, i don't really care for anything they say either, lol...liked the flow in this, vocab was good, could tell you put a lil time into it, nice drop overall keep it up
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Old 09-02-05, 11:46 AM   #5
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thanx v.much. If u want me to RTF jus gimme a link...
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