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08-29-05, 10:26 AM | #1 | |||||
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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Poetry & Politics
IP: 042E 9E4C
They told me that poetry and politics dont mix
but im the type to take a circle 2 a square n make sure it fits. figure heads, spin doctors, the media and society Turned my intoxication for reality into sobriety. Politicians push n freedom of speech is diminished 'Political correctness' means poetry is finished. How can we express what we witness!? if what we see is 'wrong', I'm not impressed. So i'm making this statement, Don't edit ur views Don't believe what u see or hear on the news Political agendas, governmental wishes and scams. Have the art of writing suppressed to please "The Man."
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08-30-05, 01:01 AM | #2 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
not sure about the man........ *smiles* very nice piece! nice structure and flow, but i'm not sure witness and impressed rhymes........... i liked your style and ability to use your vocabulary fluently in your piece, we should collab sometime. overall 9/10 keep em comin.
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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08-30-05, 01:27 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 042E 9E4C
lol thank u, it was jus sumthin i keyed in a few minutes after watchin the news lol
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09-01-05, 11:40 PM | #4 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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nice drop, very creative, i don't really care for anything they say either, lol...liked the flow in this, vocab was good, could tell you put a lil time into it, nice drop overall keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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09-02-05, 11:46 AM | #5 | |||||
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
thanx v.much. If u want me to RTF jus gimme a link...
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