meh...seein if this new mic i got is any good so recorded a lot of verses ova diff beats and put it 2getha n sumhow tied it into a track....

www.soundclick.com/acuityuk
LYRICS---> http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyrics.cfm...&songid=2729134

hit me wid sum feedback on how to improve b**ches

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203335
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203068

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everybody is from the UK....

Listening:
content wise, pretty hot...
flow: onpoint...nyce delivery going....
quality...good...yu got a nyce mixer...what yu use to record on?
beat:...its iight, i wouldnt spit to it...but yu did it justice

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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.

like 20% iif even close to that is UK gal....thanks 4 feed tho...

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i heard this on cw too. nice shit. your style is real unique. i liked the way you ended some of your bars.

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"You are by far the best MC on this site (RAPVERSE.COM)"-Morbid Malice
"But i like your lyrics and delivery, your the best i heard on tc and rtj.net" -Copernicus
"Seriously you are in the top 3 illest soundclick rappers I've heard." -Berserk***VOTED BEST MC AT CANIBUS-CENTRAL FOR 2005***

word i caught ur feed on CW thanks man...uppin foos

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remember that heavy metal band... cradle of filth? hmm just reminded me of that by the title... lol dont worry ill hit u up w/ sum feed acuity.... later....

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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bump...........

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listenin now.......

beat is cool..... quality is pretty decent.........

but your accent is hard to overcome...... but for what it is..... pretty decent drop from you......

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lmao.... I aint never heard an emcee spit wit an accent like that... tight shit though... flow is on point... produktion is tight... you got skill playa... peace

^its called, coming from the UK...

thanks for fbak bitches...

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aight i told u id b bak to peep this lol.... aight i like tha intro sample... yo acuity, you come in nyce on this shyt man, only UK dude who i reaaalllly actually like, man u killin tha multis in this one, damn u got tha UK crown ferreal, i dunno how ur not big down there, everything else ive heard is not good from them, but i like ya style, good vocab in this one man, u beastin it hahahaha, maaaan all the games finishin moves? i heard tooo many ppl say that one tho, but besides that, these lines are pretty original, oooo aight its switch up time, oooo u took this imortal tech beat? word man u vicious on this one, ha ha ha, u are tha uk beast hahahaahha, no doubt, im feelin this, still multis are everywhere, ahahaha, scooby dooby blaow blaw blaow where tha party at? hahaha yo that was great man, left like steeven, hawkings, word man, now u threw in a few wierd adlibs, aight now these scratches are noticably dl'd lol, aight now this is an aesop rock beat now, u kno how to pick em man, u comin up man, no doubt u tha uk hype man, i see u havin a future, keep hittin em man

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OMEN ON MYSPACE

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LMAO @ ur fbak fam....*wishes he was as good as omens fbak imples*....but word yo that shit feeds ma ego 4 real...IM THE BEST BITCHES

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Listening as I time.....good way to open I think....good flow...lol bout that hackney shit lol..got me laughin..but the flow is crazee on this...Im feelin this....The beat works really well with this...you changed the beat?...thats kl..but the flow aint as good but still the lyrics are good, quality is good...flow is intitially really good....but flows aiite "where the party at" that line was sick man...keep doin u...lol at impersonatin jamaican...this is real good....again bout hackney lol?...neways 9/10....reall good verse...KEEP IT UP

RTF TO One of my first songs...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204233

Thanks

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