New track by 20 Grand Ft. Me...lol...i'm feeling good bout this track...the sound effects murdered it...lmao...but for real this is some hot shit so check it out...20's on the hook and the 1st verse...i got the second verse

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207524
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206294
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207381


http://www.soundclick.com/artist/3/...nario_music.htm


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Beat is sicknin, yea the sound effects added a flare to it.......

Quality from both was real coo...

20 Grand-
it seemed that you was real confortable on this track, flow was on point. But the lines were kinda child - like. I know you could have came more complex. Good drop
Vendetta-
Similar to 20, your lines were similar. Your flow was off a fraction in some spots...Good drop also.

This is a track i would bump down the street.......fa sho..........

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not bad im impressed the phantom of Rv has return bout time you comin out cha cave jr....oh well let me get str8 to vendetta you aint come hard enough doggy but cho sure held your own on the track na'mean should of came wit a nice laid back swagger it would of topped it off...but over all nice track 8.5/10 1ne..

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hmmm...20..ya shit was kinda simple really..lmfao!.."like ballpark we hot dog"...lmao..that shit..was...wack..real wack..sound like some dipset type of shit from u 20.=\...Vendetta..ya joint was ok..prolly on the same level as 20's..

nothin special came from either one of yall really..i thought yall would come back wit a bang..lol..guess i was wrong tho..and if u ask me..which yall prolly wont care..but..man switch that shit up..all that gangsta shit is BORIN..seein as tho yall talk about the same shit everytime..i dunno..try somethin new maybe?

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hmmm mite as well see if any progression has been made here... i like this beat, its tite... 20 up first, flow is aight, punches are still on sum played shyt tho maan. just bein hones... push keys was prolly tha closest to original tho... that spit sick like rabies do line again.... still reusin lines... chorus is aight, hotdog line is lame tho... aight now debit comes in. soundin alot different on this one, damn yo honestly i like this verse too many gun lines but honestly ya style is sumn i can feel now, flow is on point ferreal.. im thinkin tha lyrics are bland, but ya style has def improved. debit shinin on this one f'sho. good job on tha vast improvement. keep it runnin

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Wow. This beat is fucking nasty as shit. Its seriously turning me on.

20: Good shit from you, feeling the hook...This is most def a banger if I ever heard one...Lyrics were good, youre flow is really nice on this...presence is always good...Nothing left to say but solid shit from you...

Debit: Haven't heard you in forever...Welcome back man..."CLICK, CLACK, CLACK, CLICK"...I love this shit...multies were hot, flow was on the whole time...lyrics were hot...I still have this shit on repeat.

Good shit y'all

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Uhh.... Ok so I decided to check out some of what RV is bringing these days..

I def aint feeling the slow flow... Sorry guys, this sounds like an amature version of g-unit but way more over the top trynna be hard gangsta shit.. Loosen up on the real, first guys voice sounds like hes trynna squeese a log out...

Yous need to lose the whole slow squarish flow... It just sounds way too over the top and un-natural and the lyrics could not be any more generic I swear, if I had a doller for every rapper that I've heard spit gat lines like that..... I would be able to retire at age 19..

I dont wanna get dudes all defencive n shit, but you might wanna try and make stuff that sounds less like almost every single other netcee in existance..

I get the feeling I should of prolly left this one alone... But I think yous could do a lot better than this and I think that people are being way too sugar coated with their feedback..

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This beat was hittin it was a solid peace yall came hard and the quality was good I liked verse 1 the best if I must say but everyone did good I'd give this a 7.5/10 good job

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