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09-04-05, 05:02 PM
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Crazy Boy Blues...Part Two
IP: 3240 794D
Hahaha..oh yeah..it's part two of an episode of very crazy boy blues. I'm the lion, the tiger, the hunter of a jungle whose tale is all a ruse. Fall from branches, make some believers of your cleaver 'n confuse, I carve masterpieces...yet they say I'm unoriginal in police reviews? ___________ They called me Little Billy, am I a silly Little Billy, you stupid faggots? Little did they know, in that back of the house I displayed bad habits. They were playing games 'n seeking...when I stretched out hides.... making squirrels lose the world I was denied, I slowly died inside.... I'd go and pride myself in my trophies as my mother would beat me. Yup, mom would rape her kid so constant fear could always eat me. An abandoned shack is a retreat, a discreet place with red concrete, it was a palace to me, but it was missing one thing, wasn't complete. Yeah......... I admit it......... I was weak. Blood was green to me, fed my greed so I could see someone else's pain. May seem like I was taking it a little seriously but I guess then I was lame. I had a saint sister...you want to know a secret? She was never touched, she was never hitten with a wooden bat, and she was never force-fucked. I heard a noise...the source a truck... coming to take her from all the caring. I never made it to the house from my hiding place in time from pain sharing. Yeah, she was crying, how could they tear her away from her grand sibling, but I could see through the tears that her fear... was an emotion that was adlibbing. My request for emancipation was denied on the grounds I was just too young, so then came the day I slit off mom's naughty tongue and punctured dad's lung. This was part two of a sad story of mine entitled the crazy boy blues. Another of a bad trilogy that turned pure into a ravaged man's taboo. |
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09-04-05, 05:09 PM
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IP: 237A 5A3B
Structure... sexy
concept..... beautiful outcome.... dope vocabulary...great imagery..... price-less all............ super smashing GREAT |
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09-04-05, 07:41 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
I Love You Alll!
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09-05-05, 10:49 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin Pineapples.
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09-05-05, 07:02 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
Magic muffin melons.
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09-06-05, 08:12 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Dora the exploring elephant.
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