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08-02-05, 02:41 AM
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Hate It Or Love It Ft ...Loyalty
IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Hate it Or Love It ..Remix..!
[Verse 1. B.C] Huslin for cake ...Day in and day out ..Slang dat rock Telling Fiends..you need wat i got?just come to the block.. Ppl Never there for you so you learn to stand on your own.. Tryin to get in the zone,Cus someday you try'na take that thrown.. Dad never home... Mom always at work ..Nothin to guide you.. So i started following my crew..and Always repping that blue.. Till that day my clique..Went down the strip.. that Same day.. I had my worse color drip.. Kill me? No cus my pride is something you can never take away! Now i gotta a family of my own.. tryin to put bread on the table.. ...........Just wishing you would be able.. to pay for that cable.. Then i found my way,Started Written on paper..learning the game That was my aim..hopin that this rap gane would bring me fame.. And give my family shyt i never had.. thats all i could ask for... Just watching my seed,grow up and have stuff i never had before.. Its best feeling in life,So you can hate on me..but i got what i need Supporting my family..and rapping till the day i see my seed succesed..! [Chorus] Hate It Or Love, I'm Taking Your Spot And I'm Gone Come Till I Take A Shot You'll Can Hate On Me,But I Got Wat I Need Just Spitting The Truth..Till The Day I Bleed [Verse 2. Loyalty] Growing Up Was Hard We Use To Hustle To Get Money Pops Never Around Cause The Buster Just Gets Bummy I Was The Oldest.....So I Had To Work At 10 Years Old Hustle So My Family Aint Broke, Even Then Tears Froze Now I Got A Family Of My Own... I Still Hustle For Bucks Not Robbing Houses And Banks But I'm Busting In Trucks Had A Grip Of Help Coming Up, Props To My Boy Jason I've Bin Waiting To Explode, Just Sitting Plotting It Patient Said Mike Ride With Me.......I Promise To Die To Be True Flip The Heat On Me..Hommie I'll Honestly Ride For You No Drugs.....Just Making Bucks, Just To Raise My Family Making It Big With Duckets These Days They Handing Me Shit Dawg I Won't Stop......Till My Heart Breaks Or Aches I Don't Need No Confidence From Peeps I'm Making Cake Old Peeps I Knew Back When I Know They Wishing I Fell Sit Back....Knowing If It Wasn't For Them I'd Sit In A Cell (HaHa!) [Chorus x2] Hate It Or Love, I'm Taking Your Spot And I'm Gone Come Till I Take A Shot You'll Can Hate On Me,But I Got Wat I Need Just Spitting The Truth..Till The Day I Bleed http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=41087 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=41087
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08-02-05, 02:51 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
HaHa Chea Dawg We Back On Top Of The Map
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08-03-05, 12:52 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
Bumping This Piece
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08-03-05, 04:13 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
Upping This......................
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08-03-05, 04:48 PM
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The Emcee Shogun
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IP: D1A9 F8DE
da,m I liked this a lot. I think it would be better in an audio version though cuz it was a lil hard to imagine the beat. Also I dont think u really stuck to the topic that was in the real song but u did write this very good. I cant wait to hear an audio version if there will be one. I think overall its a 8/10 cuz it needs to be an audio lol, and it was maybe a lil off topic. Props to u guys on this excellent piece keep writing. And leave some feedback on my Om's please. And if possible my topical battle.
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08-03-05, 07:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
was feelin this a lot emotion was like whoa everything was good........8/10 for sure.....if audio 10/10 keep it up and rtf on my om in my sig.......i admire u guys
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08-22-05, 12:18 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
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09-06-05, 11:46 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 54E6 591E
blah not that bad for a text remix lol i dont think either of your verse would flow to the beat lol but oh well it was straight nothing special but it wasnt bad either
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09-08-05, 11:52 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: D9C0 9685
dat shyt was hard....keep duin wuht yall duin man holla atcha boi 1
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