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4-1 same

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Win by 3-0 KO

ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 10:20 PM.

c.ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 10:23 PM.

Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow

We opposites,
U stop, I go
I win, u don't
I will, u wont

I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go

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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style

Aye blood dont let the record fool u

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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style

It doesnt....I know ur wack!(lol.)

Naw,fam..I hope its a good battle...

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!

Too Eazy,Really!..Hah?

YOu have been owned!
Now bitch get out there an Make my Moneyz! *sing's "its So Hard On ah Pimp"*

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

lol that nigga evil was wack though,ya boy gotta conspiracy in his head that evil cheated,n i think im rite..............im out Bs^^

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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style

aye i c u in tha streetz ima fckin Burry ya head in

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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
^^
c's one good line but it wasn't a punch, but still decent
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cold steel-
i wasn't feelin any of your lines but you were throwin punches and tryin to make fun of 'em with
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This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
^^^
these were dissin 'em but you didn't have any creativity, but punches still win but try some wordplay like that one line ghost had... word?
PLEASE RETURN WITH A VOTE ON MY BATTLE AGIASNT MR. LYRICIST!!!!! LINK IS IN MY SIG

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Sike nah good verse...........................and yeah it was cold wit wat happend to my aunt..............Ull c it 1day


~1~

Js^

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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style

shit gonna come back around

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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style

C. Ghost
Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
No.....Wack... 0/10
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
No.. A bit played out...0/10
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
An okay attempt at a punch...1/10
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
Self glory diss's is what i want to here..0/10
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow

We opposites,
U stop, I go
I win, u don't
I will, u wont

I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
HAHAHA no!!! Elevate
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
No...come harder.. 0/10
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go

No 0/10

Elevate on everything. Punches were weak strucutre was ok. flow was bad. Multis an personals werent even a consideration you dint have any... You were nothing but self glory. Diss you opponent... 1/10

Cold Steel

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
Nice wordplay....8/10
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
okay... bit og a multis too. 7/10
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
No, dont know where you got aunt jackie... 0/10
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!
good punch/closure 8/10

Good overall verse. Flow was good strucutre was good. I think you only had one multi in there come with more... You had good wordplay to an your verse was interesting to read....

Breakdown
punches-Cold
personals-Cold
flow-Cold
strucutre-Cold
complexity- Cold
creativity-Cold
wordplay-Cold
multis-Cold

v/ Cold for harder hitting punches personals an all aroun verse. He won this hands down..

I dont have 100 posts so i can only leave good feed. g/l with this.

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