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Old 09-08-05, 08:53 PM   #1
Kawn Flixx
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Criminal *Jailed* Come back

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Its a rap hoe you done ended your life... Why come at bone with this wack shyt..Check it


This criminal fool..getting beat down .. just look at his Avatar..
Dissing me bitch you want fame?
Cus ill just call you king solo alias,And Respond "Im Sorry you are"
This fool got a win..did you battle maddrapper?Its a Damn Shame.
Yu aint ever don anything agaist the law,so stop proclaiming a false name
Now listen to Atticus..and pic of a pen and stab yourself with it..
But yet you still wouldnt have Lyrical Content..not even alittle bit..!
So go with oscar the grouch,and through you and ya rhymes in the trash..
Cus the only time criminal feels irrated is when he has a diaper rash..!
You lucky this aint a battle.. your record would look exactly alike..bitch
Shut your mouth..Before i put you with the fishes ina big ass ditch..
So dont come at me again with this childish bullshyt..you dont compare..
Cus if you do ... Ill be sure you dont breath again..you'll just walk on air..!



Nuff said Good Night
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Old 09-09-05, 06:20 AM   #2
atti?
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Lolmao Who The Fuck Is Criminal Anyways?

I Saw He Posted A Poem Called "The Nonexistant Traveler"
... Wich Was Also Posted By "The Verbalist" On A Site Called 411Hype

Sooooooo, Crim, Unless You're The Verb
...You're Soon To Be Banned



And Nice Shit BC
... Lol I Really Dont Know What This Kid Is Thinking

*Shakes Head*
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Old 09-09-05, 07:18 AM   #3
Clyde Dubz
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Shit was aight structure was fucked though.
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Old 09-09-05, 01:51 PM   #4
Kawn Flixx
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^structure was fucked...hmm....guess you dont know what structure is ... upping ...and yeah i think criminal is going to get banned cus i know the verbalist and that aint him
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Old 09-09-05, 09:22 PM   #5
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nah bone, he is right, ur structure was pretty fucked, lines were beyond stretched un-fortunately cos u had sum pretty cool lines
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