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09-08-05, 04:00 PM
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Second City Submerged
IP: 1837 D2D9
*Keep in mind, this is NOT a rap, it is a song for my band, somewhat to the tune of fully completely by the tragically hip. I'm posting it here to pay tribute to those in new orleans and to recieve feedback from anybody who has any knowledge on this form of writing, thank you. Also, don't ask me why I haven't posted a rap yet, I love all forms of writing and am open to all genres.*
Another secret left in the dark She turns her eye to the shaded landscape Now the drum roll ends when the music starts We’re all okay here, after dark I said we’re all okay, We’re all okay, okay Let’s all agree on undoing ruin I’ll take you back to the city she marked Her flight came in despite being inhuman Atlantis whispered warnings to them The killers faces were swept away Upon their reflection’s stay (what a lesson was taught…) Assistance made it painstakingly clear We are all reduced to this Extremists thought the end was near A fat lady sang from her domestic rooftop She said so long to the city she loved And now it’s not okay I said no, it's not okay! I said it’s not okay here! Okay
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09-08-05, 04:44 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop 2 links or this will be closed
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The Competition
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09-18-05, 08:10 PM
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Bringin The Rukas
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IP: 3240 794D
ummm idk man didnt fell it needs work
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