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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
Due : Midnight, Eastern Time. Tonight.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-29-05 at 12:27 PM

Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in.

criminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 11:57 AM.

Reach. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 11:59 AM.

The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!

When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!

In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”

Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows

Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!

EASY!!!!!

I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit

This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut

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Voted For: criminal

Aii Breakdown

Flow- Flow has to go to Reach Bcuz his syllables were shorten so his lines were very even LOL

Punchez- Criminal .....Bcuz Reach hade a verse full of wack disses and self glorification so I Cant give this to him it would jus be unfair

Personals- Nobody dropped any personals in this battle so I Gues sthis area remains empty without any votes

Multies- Well barely Criminal droped some small lil multies in the begining and then it jus fell off but he dropped the only good multies in this battle So his takes this battle

Vocab- Criminal dropped some aii words nuttin I Aint heard but reach dropped really basic and he didnt try to extend his vocab if you ask me so crimnal takes this area

Originality- Criminal...........To me Good punchez that make me laugh and good Wordplay that makes me aww takesd the originality area in any battle and thats what Criminal did in this battle he dropped a really sloppy structure but he also did what he was spoe to do and that was drop a really dope verse and thats what he did sloppy structure or not so he takes this battle overall so

my v/ criminal

upp'in this battle
upp'in this battle
upp'in this battle

I had 4 personal's.
Uppin.

READ. dont do that vote for me favor shit.

Voted For: Reach.

yo u both got mad skills..really this was close....
but reach jus takes it in my opinion.....
better structure .flow and punches.......
every ones been telling me this but criminal you do need to fix that structure......

reach your best line was that paragraph one..which was real funny when you take into account his structure.....

yeah it was close but i think reach just got it....
good battle though.keep it up

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Met!culous

upp'in this battle for more explained votes plez..

upp'in this battle for more explained votes plez..

Voted For: criminal

v/criminal

I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
...weak....
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
...lmao...played, but still funni
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
..weak...
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit
..decent..kew multi.
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut
..weak hitting..
..eh, ya verse was mediocre...nothing really grasped me...

The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!
..played concept..
When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!
..i had to read it twice...i get it...that was a kew concept..
In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”
..lol...im feeling this..
Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows
..lmfao...that was hot..
hmm...you got good concepts...but you take the long road to get to the point....i felt this verse, though..that ender was tight

...yeah, criminal took this with an all out better verse...punches and everything
Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!

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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.

Uppin.
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Thanks For The Vote Everyone Can We Get Some More Votes Plez