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09-30-05, 11:58 PM
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Implicit - "Persevere"(Only Third Song Completed)
IP: 2029 97B3
Doomsday could argue with me, but what would be the point? Posting links in a thread after it was closed dosen't mean they were there before it was closed, which they weren't. I was wrong Dooms and just not man enough to say it.
and here's the link to my song http://reflekt.dmusic.com Last edited by Doomsday : 10-02-05 at 06:32 AM. |
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10-01-05, 02:07 AM
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IP: EF28 2BDE
You flow decent, just you need more charisma in the track. the beat calls for something moving, but I dont feel that with this. I think the fast pace flor doesnt fit well either. the ending of your verse sounds better better cause it was more paced and not just constant rhyming.
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10-01-05, 04:22 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
thanks for the feed Pair A Dyce.
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10-02-05, 04:52 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
uppin this song. need some feedback.
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10-02-05, 02:46 PM
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Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
Ok.....coo beat...
lyrically this is coo...you came in with some nice lines right out the gate......flow is good....it could use some small touch up...not a big deal though.... delivery is pretty good....and your presence as well im feelin the ad libs in the hook.... dont get me wrong...it IS a good track...but it feels like it needs something else...like some kinda extra push...im not sure.... but good post though....better than a lot of cats here...good work
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10-02-05, 03:17 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
thanks man. yeah im gonna re-record it too cause i kinda realized that it seemed like it needed a lil something more. but thanks for the feed. leave your links and i'll return the feed.
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10-03-05, 05:01 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Doomsday you pretty funny. Upping this right here. I mean come on guys. I leave feed on your songs and you dont have the decency to do the same.
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10-04-05, 12:38 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
uppin this for some feed.
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10-04-05, 04:23 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 04A2 D662
Loving the beat and the sample!
Voice is quite special, feeling it though. Got your lyrics down and you're easy to understand as well, never really rushing or mumbling your words, speaking them all clearly. Was riding the beat rather good, flow was consistent to me. Adlibs were nice add-on to the global vibe of the track. Nice shit fam!
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10-04-05, 06:01 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening now...
Nice beat...nice flow...quality is straight...nice lyrics...I think it's a good track man...keep it up. We should collab sometime  |
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10-04-05, 09:39 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
thanks for the feed LE and DQ. appreciate it. just hit me up sometime. and we'll collab on a track.
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10-10-05, 09:17 AM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I've heard this beat so much it's ridiculous
good beat though voice could be stronger on track (presence) flow isn't bad cud be better lyrics decent vocals maybe a touch low...iono...something about them doesn't jump off the track hmm..maybe dubbing differently...? decent for what it was not great though 1 |
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