Flex Muscle

Arm troops and harm groups of nitwits with a rope loop them misfits
Write in notebooks with pencils quotes hooked on stencils and twisted wit
My plan is wild wanna own land for miles but real Estate
Come with deals so fake I don’t buy in just can’t heal the hate
Need advice strong just to haggle with the price of a home it’ll break
me make no mistake gonna wear bling bold down town
by the time Spring rolls around but some chicks make hound
when summer come wanna a hummer dun a thug on dubs
love the club, got to polish my rims just to abolish them eyes of scrubs
In the house I freak but aroused from sleep when shots were fired
By Some mean duns with machine guns 19 round clip they desired
To have extreme fun I started to scream some dang I duck my head
Or get struck by led, this stressed thug can’t digest slugs end up dead
Don’t like wounds in battle a tomb could rattle your life I really dread
That for real, gangster on a path of regret with a bath of sweat on
My forehead, no love for drugs wet crack causes setbacks have to get strong
In an affair wild my girl wanna bear child best to discover a rubber
Before I become her bred lover under bed cover lethal like Danny Glover
Have a wet spree like Jet Lee in lethal weapon three things happen to a brother
Thunder takes place end up in a senile court with a judge holding a grudge
About child support, it’s a pure scorcher and pure torture leaving smudge
On your paycheck stay wrecked and behind on payments for real dawg

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this wasnt too bad, i do feel some of the bars could have been a little shorter but it still wasnt too bad, i liked most of it, i think you forced alot of rhymes but some werent bad,the structure would have help the flow if the lnes were shortened, overall i would say this is about 50/50 as bad just as it is good, keep spittin dawg 1

Micsachek thanks fo rthe props for real

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