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11-08-05, 10:33 PM | #1 | ||||
L.E
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"No Where To Hide"...Yet Another Track...
IP: DB16 D9CD
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Word...last track for The Innovation LP. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213951 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212786 Leave links and I'll return the favor. |
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11-08-05, 10:48 PM | #2 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: 2124 1B04
I just heard a loud as POP!
WHOA THERE GO ANOTHER ! Lmfao, lemme start the track over.. ok I dont know why, but when I seen the title of the song I was expecting a sample from the old song "no where to run too baby, no where to hide" that would've been dope the beat is coo, not somethin I would rap on, "I leave all you pussy bitches brutally diminished" stood out. lol, it was dope. i dont know, its somethin asbout your flow. it isnt smooth, its not choppy or nothin and you dont rhyme THAT much off beat, you just rap funny. and some of your lines - ionno - its like, you dont know how to make certain words stand out. its like you put emphasis on the wrong words. work on that. overall, this is a slightly decent track. thats all I can say this feedback is for the RG hit up my track diamonds in the rough
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11-09-05, 02:50 PM | #3 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Fucking sleepers...
Up........... |
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11-09-05, 03:25 PM | #4 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
I'm not in a good mood
so I won't leave feed but the track wasn't bad 1 |
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11-09-05, 04:12 PM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 9BA0 A53F
where can i start...i def hear slim in ur style...spaghetti...stay away from using food in the beginning of ur flow...middle..shit or end...u word like that for a reminise...not ur brain
..all in all..i couldnt feel the track..didnt know what ur tryin to convey u started off on track somewhere but strayed...work on the meoldy. yo im new posting and new to this site all-together...and what ever i say is strickly crtitique.. peace
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11-12-05, 02:09 PM | #6 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
p..............
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