I left feedback on Ike’s - FireMan and Pair-A-Dyce - Gotta Stay Fly

a yo this was me and my cousin Los bored as hell at the crib spittin on that M.O.P Ante Up beat. I spit first, he raps second

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i love this song so i hope you did a good job with it

ok it started good adlibs in the beginning with the echo you got in it.

Lethal - good flow. stayed on point throughout. lyrics were pretty good as well. quality to me wasnt very good. your mic prescence was quite good.

no hook? no nothing? what the heck happened here?

2nd guy - i liked this verse a lot. his lyrics were clear and some cool lines. his flow was also on point for the most part. and i liked how he switched it up a lil in the middle.

yall were pretty good. both voices meshed real well together. overall a good track.




can you return the favor by leaving feed on my track "Persevere"

word....beat is dope...love this song....got my head noddin son.....

flow is insane as usual....i think you got the best versatile flow on rv....and thats real talk.....lyrically its coo....good job....delivery is good....presence there...im feelin this man....

still got my head noddin.........damn first verse is long lol....u rippin man....


im liking the pass the mic feel u got.......

2nd dude.....feelin the multies......good voice....presence n delivery is there...flow is good...


what can i say man......good stuff...yall killed it....

props...........

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listening through some pro monitor headphones.

Nice beat choice - this beat's a goody! lol.

The verse dosen't fit the beat AT ALL. The mic quality is ehhh okay. I perosnally didn't liek this flow at all, though the lyrics were "okay". The entire first verse (so far, it's MAD long) is a run-on sentence and the full-stops are few and far between which makes the verse seem like it's just rambling.

Second verse, def a lot better than the first one jsut in the delivery alone. Still could use some work with the actual emotion it self though because it sounds "texty". This voice is really similar to the prior one as well and you could have done withotu that by dropping the pitch on it in the lowest incremet possible. Oh yeah, this son'g desperately needed a hook since the first verse was too damn long and just after a while honestly, melted down to "noise" in my mind. Like I jsut started tuning it out because it was jsut overkill. Should have been shorter and with WAY more full stops.

That's really about it. You already know abotu the beat cuz it's a mainstream beat. The track didn't really have one continual topic, so I can't really say you guys did or didn't hit on it since I'm not sure what it was. Prolly braggodocio though. Umm..yeah, that's it. Uno.

And stall that last line out longer and end it on that last beat hit and it would have had more impact to it.

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uppin again damn it

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get on AIM foo..........

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