been a min heres a piece i just finished

Duets in the rain.

Goofballs & Sundown.

Dreams of what we use to be.

He say, She say.

I heard, You heard.

Vision of what we've become.

Change has come...

Came faster than they expected.

I love you and laughs

To...

Fuck that and hang-ups

M.O.B...P.O.P.

Change of heart and mind...

Only to go right back to M.O.B.

And P.O.P.

Heaven to Hell

Her change brought on by pain...Betrayal

His from hers.

Would to end it be the only way to fix it?

Change equivalent to waves.

They come and go.

Same as the birds and the wind.

Sun and Moon

Refusing to say what’s on her mind.

Waiting for him to step up, be a man

Say what's on his mind.....

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hey! well at the start i kinda didnt get it, but i re-read it and i like it. Its easy to identify with (especially being a girl!) lol


Refusing to say what’s on her mind.

Waiting for him to step up, be a man

Say what's on his mind.....
^^those lines just captured how most women feel at some point about their man.


Would to end it be the only way to fix it?

Change equivalent to waves.

They come and go.

Same as the birds and the wind.

Sun and Moon
^^^but these were my favourite lines, nice gentle imagery, altho its a serious issue its quite a light refreshing poem. good read.

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