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Old 10-26-05, 07:01 PM   #1
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Exclamation Yo Diz J~R A.K.A. Royalty (thiz who i BE)

IP: 3E19 9E34

yO WAT UP ITS THA KID, JAY-R A.K.A. ROYALTY
WAT IT DO IM HERE THE KING OF DA WEST!CHEA
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Yo im the newest to thiz site
and im a tell you bout myself as i spit on tha mic
im a young nigga who hungry for a meal
im takin ova the game, money, bitches, call that a fairdeal
neva squeel im not a snitch,
im the nigga on the block wit a 45th,
neck and ear frozen homie im as cold as ice,
in a black navi creepin wit tha heat held tight,
but i cant stand niggas who wake up wit tha bluez
tryin 2 cuzz a nigga cus he rock red shoes,
packin 44's, and yes im still tippin
C-walkin Down Da Block but the blood Still DRippin,
talk shit i'll fill u up wit clipz,
im on tha grind 24/7 watch you know about thiz hustla shit,
nigga quit you aint as nice as Jay~R,
im young fly and flashy candy green on da car,
damn if you here about me then thats was up
i plan to be tha best fuk it____ wit henney in my cup,

Im out.Thiz aint the best but its jus to let you know who i be. I'll holla young!!!
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Old 10-26-05, 07:04 PM   #2
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joo iz so d0pe!
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Old 10-26-05, 07:07 PM   #3
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This would sound nice on audio...but it's not good on text.
the lyrics in this one seems to be dying for some emotion or style..and text doesn't show any of that..
A lot of people who only do text will down this..but ignore 'em.
but overall...I like it......good shit.
Keep at it..
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Old 10-27-05, 05:58 PM   #4
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thanks much love uppin dizz
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