Yea S large came at me wit a beat from my nigga aylal an was like lets do a strait banger..so I wa slike koo...an its a wrap from there...hope ya like...holla wit good feed an leave links I'll get back at u.....1

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listenin..beat is pretty nice...like the hook you def do get me interested in the track:

s-large: I like youre flow...slick...new york shit...lyrics pretty fly..like the franchize line...delivery pretty nice...hook comes in i like it...like the lil whisper effect you do

iigh in triple comes...im feelin the flow...headbangin that shit..lyrics are fly like the first verse..presence and delivery is nice..."nigguh" lol i love it when u do that llollllll...im feelin the verse...

right third guy: flow is nice...presence is good...delivery is very nice here..however the emotion is a lil lower than u can do I think..but its nice tho..lyrics are pretty nice.."rap greatest" line was nice..

9/10...nice joint

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aiight listenin'....

i ain't really like beat much. hook can't even hear seriously....... couldn't hear anything....... cuz first verse came in so much louder. First dude, pretty nice flow. quality aiight..... but some nice lyrics. Likin' the flow.... but could be upped the volume..

hook again, what I can hear shit sounds nice. I jus ain't like beat, gettin' annoyin.

Trip, nice as usual. dope flow. good lyrics. volume coo, maybe upped a lil bit. Quality usual. Can't really say much cuz it's all good

last verse, ain't really like dudes voice. Flow nice tho. likin' that. Quality coo too.
Lyrics aiight.....

but lmao I noticed, each time hook came, it sounded louder each time. but overall, it was alright. I seen better from y'all. but it was a good track tho. keep droppin'. pc one. 8/10

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ok
i hate this beat lol
choris goot except for i cant hear wht your saying in a spot love the whispery effect to this track too
1st guy good flow lyrics iono i didnt hear anything special to be honest i heard a few corny lines in there lol good emotion and delivery

triple ok i think ur vocals could be louder some good lines best lyrically but i cant hear soem of ur lines so yea you have good emotion/ delivery props good flow like usual

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I don't like this beat at all...sorry to say but i just don't. the first cat, came in wierd but he got better as it went on, his lyrics were meh but the flow and delivery was cool. trip the hook wasn't to bad, your verse trip was pretty good, I just couldn't picture you on this type of beat, but you did ya thang. and for the last cat well I couldn't really understand him to mumbly to me, his flow was shaky and so was his delivery. overall this tracks cool but I didn't like this one.

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The beat grew on me, first time I listened I didn't like it at all but it's decent now.

S large: digging your flow without a doubt, nice voice as well, suited for this type of track. Lyrics are cool, he gettin better near the end of his verse, delivery is upped near end as well. Solid shit

Triple_N hook: hmmmmmm, I've seen better from you actually, I don't know but something was annoying me about it yet I can't quite put my finger on what it is...

Triple_N verse: flow on point as usual but you sound bored on some spots, only a few though because your delivery is on point through almost the entire verse. Lyrics are on point, voice is cool, good as usual...

Vendetta: got special tone of voice actually, not bad though...Flow is different than two others, adds variation to track, lyrics are okay, overall solid as well

Keep it up guys (feedback to learn rankings for RG)

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