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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-31-05, 12:00 PM
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New to RV
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guess who man
IP: 0E40 21F3
Hook: guess who man it's tha killa clan and im tha killa to be thrilla man
Verse: it's tjb stepping in tha game watch ya fame ill can take this man this website sounded so hype that had already took the mic the reason i start defferent seasons because i had started a treason please don't try to run because if ya do you'll yall get shot bitch i can rhyme from the great mines of son damn i had raised some if yall can feel me then im not rapping felty to these streets my life is a form of light witch yall can't bite guess who it is, it's tha 9mm hitting yall like gum beamers Hook: guess who man it's tha killa clan and im tha killa to be thrilla man Verse: im not a man who can raise his hands and make the sun turn to a fan yall don't know who im am damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hook: guess who man it's tha killa clan and im tha killa to be thrilla man Buy my album ill rob ya for it vol.1 icebullets go to www.freewebs.com/tjbthakilla/ buy my album tonight call 804-861-0016 or 804-926-1203 |
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10-31-05, 12:08 PM
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New Jack
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IP: A0F2 0238
lmfao....... that will be all...!
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11-01-05, 11:47 PM
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oh yea?
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IP: 6453 2463
lol @ this being your first and only post, anyways this piece was bad man. you didnt rhyme half the times, you had some stretched lines, no flow really, the rhyme scheme was fucked up and well you still got a whole lot of elevation to do, but just keep at it cause we all start off somewhere, but WTF @ your phone number at the bottom?? thats not a good idea man.. hahaha, but I guess this was meant to be audio or something, I'd have to hear you spit this to really judge it well, cuz textually it isnt that good..
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